Panic Zone

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay

BRAVO BRAVO brother you are on the way of becomin the next great raper,
PS:i see some small mistakes in your poem if you corrige'em you'll have a great piece of work
peace out

yeah I can see taht.....The fact that I wrote it in a hurry if I tell you you don't believe that
..........Just for a half hour no more......I'm going to correct somes okey and thatks a lot for your attention

[maymay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

yeah I can see taht.....The fact that I wrote it in a hurry if I tell you you don't believe that
..........Just for a half hour no more......I'm going to correct somes okey and thatks a lot for your attention

WOOW,are u kiddin me?that great poem was written in 30 mn?that really makes me believe more and more in your potentiels
I ll be followin up your updates
good luck