I thought we are best friends

bouchra bou · 2013-06-30, 18:43

I thought our friendship is like a rose
Toguether we will let it grows
I trusted you nd every body knows
but you treaded on my toes
I shared with you my smiles
But you thrown dust into my eyes
II called you my bosom friend
And you said I'm round the bend
You know I'm really glad bcz I knewthe real you
I'm not here to blame you
I just wanna thank you
Bcz you thought me a verry good lesson
It's true I learned it the hard way
But sure I'll need it a day
Even you weren't honest with me
I don't consider you as my enemy
I thought we're best friends
But when I needed You,you left my hands
You said once that without me you'll die
But after all,it was just a liE

HOPE U WILL LIKE IT[

Katy Pretty girl · 2013-06-30, 19:03

i realy like it
it's so deep and great
just keep writting

*نسيم الفجر* · 2013-06-30, 19:11

brilliant !!! actually i was wondering if you are telling your real story ?

Karim-Rap-4-Life · 2013-06-30, 19:58

Yeah it was a lie afterall well life doesn't stop just carry on...Friendship aaaaaah come on take me away from these ppl

bouchra bou · 2013-06-30, 20:07

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i realy like it
it's so deep and great
just keep writting

thank you so much

bouchra bou · 2013-06-30, 20:13

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brilliant !!! actually i was wondering if you are telling your real story ?

thx a lot miss no sun
well unfortunetlly yes it's my story with a girl i thought her my best friend but all she was doing is lying

sofmega · 2013-06-30, 20:47

wait i have this story with a girl with the same name are you her I'm just wondering cause if you were i wanna say something

bouchra bou · 2013-06-30, 20:51

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Yeah it was a lie afterall well life doesn't stop just carry on...Friendship aaaaaah come on take me away from these ppl

well thx a lot karim for passing
yeah u r right life doesn't stop,but m not agree with u bcz friendship is the salt of life after all

bouchra bou · 2013-06-30, 20:55

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wait i have this story with a girl with the same name are you her I'm just wondering cause if you were i wanna say something

may be names are the same but i'm not that person bcz i don't know u in real life + we live in different states
so wish u can slove the problem u have with this girl the sooner the better nd that ur relation will last for ever <3

sofmega · 2013-06-30, 21:13

feww I'm saved i thought you were her truly i'm not lying or something just it was big trouble between us nothing will help it i just wanted to apologize for her that's all

*نسيم الفجر* · 2013-07-01, 01:22

[QUOTE=bouchra bou;1053335729]thx a lot miss no sun
well unfortunetlly yes it's my story with a girl i thought her my best friend but all she was doing is lying
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Well i call it a lesson not a regret..... Just know that you can't trust everybody you find in life ...my advice for you is try to get to know more about people but don't trust them 100/100 and try to be a little bit mysterious don't show your real personality to everyone ...........Good Luck sister!!!

Asolvip · 2013-07-01, 10:38

OMG how much I got hurt from my friendships , I thought I'm unlucky till I knew one day that it doesn't worth that much ... So let's live our lives
Well I loved your poem but I noticed some mistakes ... I hope you would correct them :
Let it grows --> let it grow
Teach --> taught and not thought ( taught me a good lesson)
It's good to learn from eachother ...

Peace

bouchra bou · 2013-07-01, 20:37

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OMG how much I got hurt from my friendships , I thought I'm unlucky till I knew one day that it doesn't worth that much ... So let's live our lives
Well I loved your poem but I noticed some mistakes ... I hope you would correct them :
Let it grows --> let it grow
Teach --> taught and not thought ( taught me a good lesson)
It's good to learn from eachother ...

Peace

thank u so much for passing nd for correcting my mistakes
yeah we're here to learn from each other
thank u so much

bouchra bou · 2013-07-01, 20:39

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feww I'm saved i thought you were her truly i'm not lying or something just it was big trouble between us nothing will help it i just wanted to apologize for her that's all

hope u can slove the problem between u nd became best friends again

wiwii_rock · 2013-07-09, 19:46

can i use it for a song