My second*stupid* poem

[spy4me]

hi ikram
well, im glad to say this is a very lovely poem, why? because such poem with simple diction and simple theme is the first step for excellent poems
i remember at your age i couldnt make even a good paragraph
so keep writing and read also to improve your vocabulary and style then inshallah you will be a good and prolific writer and poet
remember never try to compare yourself with the others, you'll have your own style
it's better that we call it an ambitious poem rather because you look a promising poet
may Allah help you
peace

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

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hi ikram
well, im glad to say this is a very lovely poem, why? because such poem with simple diction and simple theme is the first step for excellent poems
i remember at your age i couldnt make even a good paragraph
so keep writing and read also to improve your vocabulary and style then inshallah you will be a good and prolific writer and poet
remember never try to compare yourself with the others, you'll have your own style
it's better that we call it an ambitious poem rather because you look a promising poet
may Allah help you
peace

thank you for the awesome comment
nah,i wanna keep it as a hobby,i started poetry two days ago xD
i'll try to work w<ith your advice though,inshallah i will improve