A Beggar

Mohamed · 2012-03-30, 20:15

Very nice brother!
I really like the rhythm, the internal rhyme.
Yesterday I said I was proud of you; now I'm sure I will always be
It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.
Keep it up

~~Karim_Rap_4_life~~ · 2012-03-30, 20:28

It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.

Could you explain more sir It's not clear

spy4me · 2012-03-30, 20:40

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Very nice brother!
I really like the rhythm, the internal rhyme.
Yesterday I said I was proud of you; now I'm sure I will always be
It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.
Keep it up

thanks mohamed, a compliment i feel proud of
you're the best