I'm sad

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الــــــسلام عـــلــــــيـــكــم

This is my third poem . It's a short one but has a big meaning

I'm sad

I'm trying to be strong
But I know I'm wrong

There is a feelings of detest
That really brokes my heart

Ahhh ... I'm weak
Help me cuz I'm sick

I suffer all the time
But I hide this with a smile

? Could anyone take my hand
? And change my life by a word

As I said before , It's very short .... I hope you liked it

[Natali3]

Hi ... my friend

In my opinion it is Nice and Expressive words ...I think it is not matter short or long ...the important is the meaning and context ......Ok

For me I liked this words sooo much
I suffer all the time
But I hide this with a smile

Go ahead my friend

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Natali3

Hi ... my friend

In my opinion it is Nice and Expressive words ...I think it is not matter short or long ...the important is the meaning and context ......Ok

For me I liked this words sooo much
I suffer all the time
But I hide this with a smile

Go ahead my friend

Thank you sis ,

Yes , you're right

I'm happy cuz you liked it

[saya2011]

it's very nice poem
it's a small poem but has a big meaning
continue like that brother
but be happy in the next time

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة saya2011

it's very nice poem
it's a small poem but has a big meaning
continue like that brother
but be happy in the next time

I' will in shaa Allah

ThanK,yOu

[مبْدِعَـﮧْ حَتَّى فِي ـأَخْطَآْئِي]

Don't be sad Brow !!

I will wake you up to a new day

A day full of joy N success

Don't give up ,

There is no life with despair and no desperation with life



Wonderful writing ^^


Keep it like that all the time

GuD luck

[أمل روسيكادا]

nice poem...expressive words
just try to be happy next time
you're muslim so you should be happy and satisfied all the time
keep writing
peace

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مبدعهـ حتى فيـ أخطائيـ

Don't be sad Brow !!

I will wake you up to a new day

A day full of joy N success

Don't give up ,

There is no life with despair and no desperation with life



Wonderful writing ^^


Keep it like that all the time

GuD luck

a new day, full of joy N success ..... I hope sOoOoOoo

Nice comment

ThAnKs

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أمل روسيكادا

nice poem...expressive words
just try to be happy next time
you're muslim so you should be happy and satisfied all the time
keep writing
peace

Oui , c'est right

I have honor to be a Muslim

Merci you sister

[لـُغ ـَهہْ الآرٍُوٍُآحےۦ]

Don't Be Sad Bro cuz sadness make Pro

So Be hapPy and don't care


Good Job I like it

[** مريم **]

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركاته

Hello my friend ,

I like your poem

it's written with deep sincerity

I like it very much

Hope that I will take a pleasure to read again and again .

Dno't stop please

thank you.

[نعمة القدوس]

.. }

Hey sad guy


remember me ?

..


I have a few words for ya

"
you're not alone
together we stand
I'll be by your side you know I'll take your hand
"

Accedentaly, those are a song lyrics

hhh


don't think for a moment that I could say such things like that

anyway

I just saw your name, then had the idea to pass by
so, I found your poem

and remembered when you used to force me to read them
and write a reply


what's a wonderful time !

<< are you smiling or not yet ?


At the end, I wish you luck

be strong and you will get them all

Insha2 Allah

+

If you need me

just ask in one of my topics

cuz I allways check them when I log in


Ssalèèm



<< You supose to smile by now ? did ya ?





I did : )

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Heeeyy teacher !!!

I didn't beleive when I saw your name in

my topic ( I knew that I'll read a long

comment ... and I were right )

You said : " remember me ? "

How can I forget my teacher ( The

Maja3a ) !!!!

Ah .... I liked the song ( But I knew That

you're nOt a pOeT like Me ...hHh )

and remembered when you used to force me to read them

and write a reply

HHhHH ..... Yes I can't forget these moments ... I'm sMiling

Thank you sis for these words ... I hope you

get good marks and become the first and

the best one in your

class

Your glad brother

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة لـُغ ـَهہْ الآرٍُوٍُآحےۦ

Don't Be Sad Bro cuz sadness make Pro

So Be hapPy and don't care


Good Job I like it

Aha .... I'm happy , now .

Thank YoU sister

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ** مريم **

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركاته

Hello my friend ,

I like your poem

it's written with deep sincerity

I like it very much

Hope that I will take a pleasure to read again and again .

Dno't stop please

thank you.

Merci bien

Tha,nk you cuz you liked it