Panic Zone

[maymay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

oh thank you so much
yes you're so right yes
thanks a lot
but " an horror" is right
and "a horror " is right too
I think it is heavy to say a horror
but easy to say an horror
Maybe I'm wrong I don't know

"Those who are"___yeah it is a plural word
because of that I put "are" but I just let the
word Fan without "s" of plural to sound good
with the rhymes.

"Somes" is true and "Some" is true too

"a food" yes a mistake yes I did not know that
thanks a lot

"Blood" the meaning will be better than saying "bloods"
I mean "blood" sound stronger than "bloods" maybe
I'm wrong yes.

sorry
I mean "but who is the animal incent Low Living"
the person or the authority who make the people
suffering from the plans he does simply
the diference between the Riches and the poor "
why poor are too many.

Milano
Jaguar__Yes I was looking for the right spelling
Chikago___In Hip Hop culture "C" is mentioned "K"
I just wanted to write it like that.

Of course your corrections helped a lot the most faults was
not focusing on them the mistake that I didn't know
about is that "a" can't be used before "Uncountable nouns"
and "Plural" yeah thank you a lot for your precious participation
it is a pleasure to me it's a honor to me when you
follow my writings thank you for that for real.

I want to inform you that I will not correct the mistakes that I made I mean I will not regulate my topic again just because of members right here can see that I make mistakes too and can see that there is persons who are better than me just like you here okey and thankl you very much Miss for correcting my mistakes and just keep guiding me

I'm sorry for taking so long to answer but you know,back to college and no free time at all..
I wanna say that it would be my pleasure to follow your writings and do what i can to correct you, i just hope you dont get pissed when people tell you that you're wrong cause I ll be doing that ..

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay

I'm sorry for taking so long to answer but you know,back to college and no free time at all..
I wanna say that it would be my pleasure to follow your writings and do what i can to correct you, i just hope you dont get pissed when people tell you that you're wrong cause I ll be doing that ..

yeah yeah thank you it will be my pleasure and I say nothing I just love to see others criticize me that's so good and sweat to me even if i was demand them people right here to criticize me with a ahrd comments but no one would do that untill you came and you're appreciated that show me that people give a care to what you do or what you talk and if the opposite is true i mean no one say what he think i think there is no intelkectuals right here except few ones and thnk you