Im so sorry

[Bouchra mimi]

Hi how r u doing ?? Hope you're okay

I liked the meaning of what u wrote , although theres some mistakes

Its ok but you have to learn and improve urself

And never use shortcuts in poems

you have to work a bit harder to write flawless ones

keep going and dont give up on learning

may god bless you

[benniche farid]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Bouchra mimi

Hi how r u doing ?? Hope you're okay

I liked the meaning of what u wrote , although theres some mistakes

Its ok but you have to learn and improve urself

And never use shortcuts in poems

you have to work a bit harder to write flawless ones

keep going and dont give up on learning

may god bless you

thank's for your review

i used on purpose !? i don't know why but i fall for shortcut

by the way ; i don't call it a poem ! & the most importen for me that you read between the lines ...

unfortunately i I wrote from my heart ! words there come from ...

i think that my mind It was to down

[Bouchra mimi]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة benniche farid

thank's for your review

i used on purpose !? i don't know why but i fall for shortcut

by the way ; i don't call it a poem ! & the most importen for me that you read between the lines ...

unfortunately i I wrote from my heart ! words there come from ...

i think that my mind It was to down

yep u right and i can see that u wrote it from ur heart

i felt you and i understood ur msg and I think that was

really honest

[benniche farid]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Bouchra mimi

yep u right and i can see that u wrote it from ur heart

i felt you and i understood ur msg and I think that was

really honest

thank's yeah it is ! words & feeling merged ...