موضوع في مادة الانجليزية

[♪ L!DYA ♪]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة همسة القلوب

في الصفحة 52 من كتاب اللغة الانجليزية التمرين الاول يطلب منك كتابة خطاب لمحاربة الاختلاس والفساد ويعطيك مخططا تتبعه وتستعمله في تحرير الخطاب
أريد انتقاء بعض الافكار منكم اخوتي ودعمي في كتابة موضوع متسق
ممتنة لكم اخوتي
في امان الله

Dear citizens .. Corruption is an evil that must be fought now ! so , in order to end this problem I suggest an anti-corruption program wich contains some steps in fighting this trouble ..so if you elect me as a mayor :
Fierst of all ; I'll appoint honest civil servants by
*- ancouraging and helping persons to finish their superior studdies and after that we'll give them good chances in good conditions
- and if we discover that one of them is not honnest he'll be punished
Secondly ; I'll rehabiliate the value of work by
*- puting laws to judje workers who don't work as it should be
- and pay the good workers more than before
After that ; I'll fight tax evasion by
*- lacking tax to ger payed by every one
- each one make a tax evasion will be punished in present for many years and if he do it again the periode of present will be doubled or trippled
Finally ; I'll pass stringent laws by
*- putting in present every corrupt in addition he'll be obligate to pay an expensive tax

** I want you to think seriously in that problem . OUR COUNTRY NEEDS YOU . PLZ DON'T LET HER , SO LET'S GETHER OUR HANDS ** اختي انا هذا هو الخطاب اللي درتو ..نتمنى تلقاي فيه الشيء لي راكي تبحثي عليه ..
و عذرا على بعض الاخطاء الاملائية لكنني في عجلة من امري ، فكرت في تاجيل الرد على طلبك لكن خشيت ان تكوني مستعجلة فكتبته بسرعة..
تحيتي