My Teenage Heartbreak

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Hi there dear sis ^^

Good morning sis .... since it's third eid then still I'm able to say ... " happy eid " .. looks like you wrote this poem in Ramadan ... and looks like I'm replying in eid ... so I'm kinda late ...hhh ... any way ... let me start off with saying ... dear sis ... may Allah bless your soul and forgive you ... may Allah dry your tears and draw eternal smiles on your cheeks ^^ ... second ... the poem you wrote ... it's amazing ... it's a breath taking piece of art ... most that i liked about your poem is your honesty ... i always say honesty makes everything beautiful ... and sure you proved my point of view through your poem dear ... i have no doubt that you already know ... that it isn't a shame to make a mistake ... but it's a shame to make the same mistakes again ... dear ... we're just weak human beings .. we full in mistakes easily ... we simply go astray ... you know why? ... because most time' we feel alone ... don't know what to do any more ... we just panic in our own dark killing solitude .... making of our selves an easy victim for the devil ... hhh ... how ironic!! ... you see sis ..each time i read a poem ... i don't usually read it for fun ... i see poetry as a gate ... i see poems as mirrors ... i don't need to ask you any thing ... about you ... or about any thing related to you ... your poem says it all ... the mirror reflects the facts ... do you know what your poem says ? .... or more like what your mirror says .... it says that you're strong ... it says that you posses the strongest weapon any body could ever have ... " honesty " ... looks like i said a lot ...hhh ^^sorry ... thnx for sharing anyway ... loved it ... keep up ^^ ... your bro .. jimmy

My Allah keep ya safe