the begining of my short story

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة miss.cool

aaaaah omg i feel like im watchin a movie

then that to e continued came

plzzz bro continue
i want the rest


awesome terrific amazing adorable
............. story

u got talent period!!p

loved it loved it

i was about to cry readin that jimmy died
too bad

Ha Ha Ha Sara nice to see you reading it. You know I am really in need of you as an audience to tell me whether the scenes are perfect or not.
Crying mean that you're sensitive I promise you'll cry really when you read the next parts suffering in LA and the accident that make him banned to see the girl.........

[miss.cool]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

Ha Ha Ha Sara nice to see you reading it. You know I am really in need of you as an audience to tell me whether the scenes are perfect or not.
Crying mean that you're sensitive I promise you'll cry really when you read the next parts suffering in LA and the accident that make him banned to see the girl.........

the scenes bro r perfect more than perfect
eeeuh im soopaaaaaa exciyed to read the rest
make it quick plzzzzzzz


peace