Past

[Hillin]

Wow Darling
you seems disaponted
here WE are
wer're by ur side
encourage u to carry on
and wishing you all the best
Thank you dear for sharing us such pretty expressive poem
By the way,I wanna just draw your attention to "little grammatical & orthograph mistakes"l
such as after "to"generally supposed to be"infinitive
nd just try to avoid writing( 'and') many times iwithin one sentence coz in such way it's similar to arabic structure
و,,,,,,,,و,,,,,,,,,,,و
in english we say
I liked,played,and enjoyed it
well,Hope to avoid them for next poems
so Best of Wishes