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[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهرة القلوب

hi teacher

ok sir i wait your correction

I've already corrected it.Look up

[جوهرة القلوب]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

I've already corrected it.Look up

oups , teacher , sorry
yes i look it now
thx , May Allah bless you

i wait another
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[جوهرة القلوب]

you received a letter from your friend .she/he told about his /her holidays .she /he would like to know how you spent your holidays

write her /him a letter .tell her /him what you did in your holidays

Dear freind

I'm so pleased to inform you how i spent my holidays
In the first days i traveled to Batna and i stayed there about a week , it was a very nice place and i visited my aunt there
When i returned to my house i revised my lesons and prepared myself for bem .After tow week the vacation finished
and we returned for our school
I hope you spent a very nice days in your holidays



Your's
=)
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[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهرة القلوب

Dear freind

I'm so pleased to inform you how i spent my holidays

In the first days i traveled to Batna and i stayed there about a week , it was a very nice place and i visited my aunt there

When i returned to my house i revised my lesons and prepared myself for bem .After tow week the vacation finished

and we returned for our school

I hope you spent a very nice days in your holidays

Your's

=)

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Peace be upon you
well
the first thing I noticed is the absence of punctuation
there is only a comma
the second thing,the pronoun I is always capitalized so no i
concerning punctuation ,I'm so pleased to inform you how i spent my holidays
put a full stop after holidays

then
In the first days, and carry on till week and put a full stop

after that
a new sentence so start with a capital letter
it will be like that It was ..... till there and put a full stop

finally,after two weeks(you forgot the s ) not tow(I know c'est une faute de frappe) put a comma and carry on till the end of your sentence I mean our school and put a full stop

BEST OF LUCK