" دورة اللغات الاجنبية "

[نغمة حياة]

i went to my school slowly because i afraid to get a worst rate when i was arrived at school i saw my friends happy - When I saw the list and I found myself one of the first in this moment i very happy and I dreamed I fly a lot of joy

[نغمة حياة]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kada766

i went to my school slowly because i afraid to get a worst rate when i was arrived at school i saw my friends happy - When I saw the list and I found myself one of the first in this moment i very happy and I dreamed I fly a lot of joy

I wait your assessment

[The Pink cloud]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kada766

i went to my school slowly because i am afraid to get a worst rate when i was arrived at school i saw my friends happy - When I saw the list and I found myself one of the first in this moment i am very happy and I dreamed I fly a lot of joy

very good
inchallah your
dream to have
a high grade came true

[saya2011]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kada766

i went to my school slowly because i am afraid to get a worst rate when i was arrived at school i saw my friends happy - When I saw the list and I found myself the first one in this moment i am very happy and I dreamed I fly a lot of joy

it's a nice paragraphe
but i have some observations
the mistakes are in red
and can i know why do you use the past
i wish you aren't angry from my remarcks