your opinions for my paragraphe about amazon forest

[DarknesFreak]

The amazon is one of greatest forests in our blue planet
ladies and gentlemen this amazing forest is very important to our life because it protects and Preserves our environment by giving us fresh clean air My dream is that we ensure that this resource will remain natural and not contaminated by the dark side of human evolution like tobacco smoking and carbon dioxide emissions ,
it's our duty to take action against this side effects
i hope that you enjoyed listening to me and understood my message, and thank you very much for coming..


i hope you don't mind i took the liberty of changing some things in your paragraph