صفحة خاصة بالإنجليزية

[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

you're welcom

i have some topics about situation of integeration

if you want i'll write it here

[جوهرة القلوب]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

you're welcom

i have some topics about situation of integeration

if you want i'll write it here

Thanks sooo much ...

that's very kind of you my sister ...

you may post them

my regards

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهرة القلوب

Peace be upon you

how are you teacher
i hope you are fine & well
the bem is very soon , i hope you stay with us
as we know you , May Allah save you
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Peace be upon you

Ten years ago,why ten years ago,say directly in the
past. people didn't use to live the way we live today here,we can say did not use to live as we do today to avoid repetition

.Fot there food (for their food),they used to eat fruits and vegetebals (vegetables) ,but I don't think so then it's better to omit it so and they used to hunt animals and
they used to wear the skin of animals . In there not there but their trips they used to travel by donkeys and camels.
To entrain (entertain),the(omit the) people of the past why you repeat,in the beginning you tell us that you are going to talk about the past they used to tell stories of to not of there the same thing their not there children to learned teach by the way after to use directly the infinitive them
the lessons of the(omit the) life
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i hope you correct it
=) &
i wait another

This is my suggestion if nobody minds
BEST OF LUCK

[جوهرة القلوب]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

This is my suggestion if nobody minds
BEST OF LUCK

Thank you my dear sister .... May Allah save you

Could you have a look at this i added somethings

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[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

wirting expression n 1 the enviromment will be in real danger .if we don't find the solutions *
write to your friend a letter telling him how we can preserve our environment

writing experssion n 2
you're still a 4 am student .but you dream to have a better life one day
write a pragraph in which you say what you would do if you got rich one day

writing exprassion n 3
you received a letter from your friend .she/he told about his /her holidays .she /he would like to know how you spent your holidays
write her /him a letter .tell her /him what you did in your holidays

writing expression n 4
the editor of your school magazine would like to publish some articles about some inventions.he has asked you to prepare article on this topic
choose the invention tou think is the most useful and write an article about it

[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

this all what do i have if i find another topics i'll write it in tis page

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهرة القلوب

Thank you my dear sister .... May Allah save you

Could you have a look at this i added somethings

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You are welome
امين ياربي
well ,you said ten years ago I told you before say directly in the past
In my opinion,it's better to omit first
I mean,when you said first ,for their food
so,it will be like that for their food,they used to eat fruits and vegetables concerning fruits and vegetables,did they exist in that period?anyway.Look sister,you said before they ,so don't repeat it again ,it will be like that hunt animals not they hunt animals
they used to wear the skin of animals,I would say animals' skin
in their trips,donkeys and camels
to entertain,why the people of the past ,omit the of people as well they
you said they used to tell stories ,we know who used to tell stories ,so there is no need to they
to help them ,I prefer to teach them
the last sentence,may here stands for what?If I were you,I would say it's true that this life was hard ,but it was wonderful
BEST OF LUCK

[abir2000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

No problem Abir.It's better to study it for you'll need it in your future studies

thnx for response teacher

[raoufnina]

بارك الله فيك

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

Ten centuries ago,people didn't use to live the way we live today.Write an article

in which you explain how people used to live 10 years ago

the food they used to eat

the clothes they used to wear

the means they used to travel by

how they used to entertain

Lamia,just look above.I've written : Ten centuries ago and not : Ten years ago

Well,I'll be back to correct your production

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهرة القلوب

Peace be upon you
how are you teacher
i hope you are fine & well
the bem is very soon , i hope you stay with us
as we know you , May Allah save you
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Ten centuries ago, people didn't use to live the way we live today
.First , concerning their food ,they used to eat fruit and vegetebales and they used to hunt animals
In addition , they used to wear the skin of animals . In their trips, they used to travel by animals,too .
To entrain, people in the past used to tell stories to their children . Maybe this life was so simple an hard but really , it was wonderfull !

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Please , could you correct what i' wrote ,and i'm waiting for you remarks
=)

Lamia;I've just corrected your production.I can evaluate it as good even if it contains some mistakes

but it doesn't matter.For the remarks of Toulay,I don't agree with some of them.I 'll discuss that later on

[جوهرة القلوب]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

Lamia;I've just corrected your production.I can evaluate it as good even if it contains some mistakes

but it doesn't matter.For the remarks of Toulay,I don't agree with some of them.I 'll discuss that later on

hi teacher

ok sir i wait your correction

[جوهرة القلوب]

thank you sister farah

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهرة القلوب

hi teacher

ok sir i wait your correction

I've already corrected it.Look up

[جوهرة القلوب]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

I've already corrected it.Look up

oups , teacher , sorry
yes i look it now
thx , May Allah bless you

i wait another
=)