A Beggar

[spy4me]

a beggar not like any other, triggers a special feeling in me
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So sad and blue, to see that poor asking for food, and too, tears flow

Every time needs people to know and more to go

Through what makes him undergo, his woe, gives show

That I’m wrong when I plain, I’m wrong when I complain

I feel I'm all the time running away

When he walks next to my way, I want to say

Look at me, I'm bleak, those pieces make me sick and weak for a week just to pick

What way should I take, it's fake, to make all this shake,

And keeping pay, the price, for trice, I knew

That I’m wrong when I plain, I’m wrong when I complain

So deep so far, that being like a stranger at home, his scar, tells more

About his suffering from poor, my star, in the sky, trying to sway me long with my soul, I feel sole, now I know

That I’m wrong when I plain, I’m wrong when I complain

I pray, everyday, all people never say, “look at that foolish”, because I keep in mind, they still blind, to see, to find, what I could see, what I could know

That I’m wrong when I plain, I’m wrong when I complain
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and you will you ever complain
?

[Mohamed]

Very nice brother!
I really like the rhythm, the internal rhyme.
Yesterday I said I was proud of you; now I'm sure I will always be
It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.
Keep it up

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

very nice sir very best of the best carry on

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.

Could you explain more sir It's not clear

[Mohamed]

I think we have a problem in Algeria. People say they read books, but when it comes to production (writing) everybody finds it so hard. That's why I'm saying it's good to see people who are able to produce an compose their own works

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Mohamed

Very nice brother!
I really like the rhythm, the internal rhyme.
Yesterday I said I was proud of you; now I'm sure I will always be
It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.
Keep it up

thanks mohamed, a compliment i feel proud of
you're the best

[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

very nice sir very best of the best carry on

thank you karim for reading
you're a good writer as well as a good poet

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

thank you Sir ...I don't think i'm a good writer as much as you and sir Mohamed you're teh best wish you good luck

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Mohamed

I think we have a problem in Algeria. People say they read books, but when it comes to production (writing) everybody finds it so hard. That's why I'm saying it's good to see people who are able to produce an compose their own works

yeah we already know that there is a problem when it come to production exactly when we talk about Foreign ******** . If I told you something would you believe me?? I don't read poems? I just prefer one kind of literary works which is the detective novels and that's all.