Lost in a dead world

[Asolvip]

I live a disastrous life full of sadness
I always try to look for a piece of happiness
But every time I try I fall disappointed
What can I do to get out of this world?
I'm tired; I drew these lines to tell my sorrows
Because I feel like people are throwing me with arrows
They hurt me and I cry, but now my tears are about dry
Why? This is not fair
I can't even breathe this dirty air
Or smell this filthy odor
I'm strangling over here
No one could see me
Just my sweet soul which had been tortured by you dear
So thank you, but you need to listen to me clear
From now on, I won't scare or fear
I'm not going to stay forever
But I'll live this moment and make it better
With a large smile, I'll kill you for a while
Then I'll close that sad file
Walking with held high head
*And a smiling face in every place

[hananedove]

Oh damn Girl so so strong ............. I like it .......... Keep Going .......stay strong
Smile ........:)............. because with ur smile u'll make any one die :) stay so hight
Ur sis ♥ Peace

[Asolvip]

Of course I'm strong now and thx for the compliment :) :)

[bouchra bou]

wow .......wondrful poem....keep it up
well kep on smililng coz smile is the best weapon we have to fight the obstacles and overcome them..................it's how i face my sadness and it really works with me
best of luck......waiting for more
REMEBER :don't let the world change ur world,but try try change the world with ur smile
peace

[Asolvip]

Of course , I worked hard to create my own world and I won't lose it easily ... So I hope all the sadness flash away and the happiness comes to our world and stay. *

[Black_Poison]

Great....great....and great
^_______________^
This is my smile...i wish it won't kill anyone
hhhhhhhhhh
just kidding
keep up your smiling face...and kill your haters
they want you sad...don't give the what they want
just do the opposit...and kill them
congrats darling

[.kiki]

trust me, life is not that bad if you just tryed to look at the bigger picture

it's not permanent, nor it is real
nothing but fake and temporary
so how could it be that we keep on expecting our lives to be as happy and colourful as fairytales
we just have to get over this life
we just have to do what we're here to do
we're not supposed to enjoy it

[Asolvip]

Of course , we r here in this life for a reason and it is praying Allah and do the right thing and if we make a mistake , we will learn ... My life was disastrous but I'm the only one who turns it into nice and cool and full with smile :)