I have a dream

Maroco 94 · 2012-08-24, 18:21

I have a dream

"I have a dream", he said
as sweat came falling from his head
I listened, anxious, hanging on his every word
The people were quiet so this black rev. could be heard
"All men are created equal", I heard him say
But I doubted it on this day
For the past week, month, and year
We were forced to run, to fear
How could there be equality in the land
While hate has ruled with iron hand?
All of a sudden there was a real loud bang
And to this day no one knows from whom the bullet sang
Everything was like slow mo
When I saw the pastor go
He fell down with a biff
His body was cold and was stiff
We tried to help but it was too late
Cause he was already at the gate
In the shadows we were livin'
Until to us our rights were given

I hope u will like it

honnest smiley · 2012-08-24, 21:52

so nice! i really like it

Maroco 94 · 2012-08-24, 22:45

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة honnest smiley

so nice! i really like it

thanks alot sister

Jimmy The Rap Soldie · 2012-08-24, 23:30

Hi dear

wonderful poem ... i see it as a gate at many dark opened doors ... sometimes appears to be the reverse ... looks like it deals with much at the same ... nice expressions ... keep up ... good luck ... your bro ... jimmy

Take care ... god bless ya

Maroco 94 · 2012-08-25, 11:51

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jimmy The Rap Soldie

Hi dear

wonderful poem ... i see it as a gate at many dark opened doors ... sometimes appears to be the reverse ... looks like it deals with much at the same ... nice expressions ... keep up ... good luck ... your bro ... jimmy

Take care ... god bless ya

hi my brother jimmy thanks so much for your talking u make me so proud
thanxxxxxxxxxx