Midnight Madness (by me)i

[.kiki]

Midnight Madness




It’s almost midnight

And I’m still with my pillow in a great fight

Different thoughts and scenes I see so bright

Different stories, different ends, different people, different feelings

But ONE single bleeding heart

Always so lonely, so hurt

Sometimes I think I’ve had enough

And days turn to years, a feeling so tough

Sometimes I feel like a queen

When your memories make me happy like I’ve never been

And I look up to the sky

And feel so satisfied

And regret every tear and every “why”

Sometimes I see it so simple

And sometimes I can’t understand this tie

Sometimes I petty my heart feeling it trembles

But sometimes I enjoy the freezing muscle, so dead, so quite

And then I always wonder…

Could a dead frozen heart beat again?

And for a second, it seemed like it might!

[maymay]

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH It's really absolutely so freaking wonderful...your pen is growing so fast honey....you inspire me every time i read your words...so do me a favor and never stop....

[spy4me]

that's pretty nice poem with expressive words and true meanings
well, i think we have so much in common, i mean that routine story when i hug my pelow all that nostalgie, all those memories, and those thoughts really push me to write and to get to understand some facts i have never thought about when my eyes were open
i think this poem expresses me as well, except the fact of the bleeding dead frozen heart lol
by the way the title is incredibly suitable
thank you...good one you made, keep writing well
peace

[هدهد بريكة]

nice job kip moving to the best

[.kiki]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH It's really absolutely so freaking wonderful...your pen is growing so fast honey....you inspire me every time i read your words...so do me a favor and never stop....

What a pleasure, friend, to hear this from you
I can't tell you how much that makes me happy ^^
(I shared some thoughts by texting you that night, remember? hihi)

thnx deary

[.kiki]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة spy4me

that's pretty nice poem with expressive words and true meanings
well, i think we have so much in common, i mean that routine story when i hug my pelow all that nostalgie, all those memories, and those thoughts really push me to write and to get to understand some facts i have never thought about when my eyes were open
i think this poem expresses me as well, except the fact of the bleeding dead frozen heart lol
by the way the title is incredibly suitable
thank you...good one you made, keep writing well
peace

aha! interesting... it makes me feel better to know i'm not the only mad one around here

Thank you very much for your encouraging words, brother, I really do appreciate your passing by


Peace

[.kiki]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة هدهد بريكة

nice job kip moving to the best

I'll do my best

thank you so much for your reply

peace

[maymay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة .kiki

What a pleasure, friend, to hear this from you
I can't tell you how much that makes me happy ^^
(I shared some thoughts by texting you that night, remember? hihi)

thnx deary

hhhh I could feel that you wrote it that same night....wish you all the best...

++

I need to talk to you,I'm waiting for you in HERE

[Hillin]

Hi KIKI
nice to c u again
I was reading the lines and I said
A poor pillow
heheheheh
yea dear it happens to me when I was n't enough tired
coz when I was so tired U can even carry me to unknown place and I wouldn't feel how U did that
heheheheh
congratulations friend really I enjoyed reading someone's daily experience
Dear you have to look to the clock from a time to time since if you don't count how much time you wasted recalling fictional events;u will have a beautiful rings under your eyes next day
hehehehehehehe

[Hellsmoke]

It's freakin' awesome !! Oh dear such a nice flow writin' ...I think we ' R the witness of a new born writer ...

Keep the flow never let it go, !!


Thx 4 sharing

'

[.kiki]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hillin

Hi KIKI
nice to c u again
I was reading the lines and I said
A poor pillow
heheheheh
yea dear it happens to me when I was n't enough tired
coz when I was so tired U can even carry me to unknown place and I wouldn't feel how U did that
heheheheh
congratulations friend really I enjoyed reading someone's daily experience
Dear you have to look to the clock from a time to time since if you don't count how much time you wasted recalling fictional events;u will have a beautiful rings under your eyes next day
hehehehehehehe

hhhh
yeah I guess the victim here was the poor pillow
+
I really have an issue with sleeping, so honey, you don't have to remind me at aaaaall, 'cause once I fall asleep.... you should forget about me before i wake again ^^
+
Thank you very much, friend, glad to see you here

[.kiki]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hellsmoke

It's freakin' awesome !! Oh dear such a nice flow writin' ...I think we ' R the witness of a new born writer ...

Keep the flow never let it go, !!


Thx 4 sharing

'

Oh! I don't know what to say! thank you very much, that's so nice of you

Honored by your words

take care!... Peace