The end

[* الدنيــــ ألوان ـــــــا *]

when everything falls apart
when everyone takes his flight
it's just like when
your favourite book is ending
and it's characters are fading
it's like your favourite movie is finishing
and you know it ain't reapeating
it's fate ! it's life's game ...
it's God's wish 4 an unknown aim
isay let it go let it pass and start a new rhythm
change the beat and let it flow cuz it's better 4 your soul
don't waste your time on greaphing
time is money time is gold don't lose it on anything but believing



it's my 1st time publishing one of my writings
enjoy it
i deeeeeply hope that you like it guys
peace and love

[gothica ruby]

dat's really nice hun ...u did a good job ..really .." i'm just fallin' in love with it" hhh XD ...wish ya good luck ...it's soo deep ...n emotional ..

[* الدنيــــ ألوان ـــــــا *]

oh thank you sooo much hon i really needed the encourgement !
and almost all my poems are deep cus i only write when i'm upset

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة gothica ruby

dat's really nice hun ...u did a good job ..really .." i'm just fallin' in love with it" hhh XD ...wish ya good luck ...it's soo deep ...n emotional ..

[gothica ruby]

u're welcome darling ^_^

[* الدنيــــ ألوان ـــــــا *]

! ?i guess no body likes mine , huh

[Thαt ģίяĻ]

No , sister i like it , beautiful words
don't give up

[مَجْنُوْنَةٌ أَنَاْ]

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[.kiki]

very very nice.. ya bakhila why don't you write here often hh? huh

very good, dear, plz keep it up..

waiting for your next

[CuTe Youya]

really, fabulous and emotional in a sort, I love it, I just adore it, oh god! that's great!!! keep on, waiting for your other pen's wonders!!!

[miss.cool]

nice poem sis

keep it up
n do more

enjoyed readin it so much


peace

[Black_Poison]

i like it sweety
and i like your name
it's my style
keep going
don't deprive us your creative poems

[قمر البتول]

nice work
u did a good job tknx

[مَجْنُوْنَةٌ أَنَاْ]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Thαt ģίяĻ

No , sister i like it , beautiful words

don't give up

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thank you thank you sister
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة .kiki

very very nice.. ya bakhila why don't you write here often hh? huh

very good, dear, plz keep it up..

waiting for your next

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cuz when i wrote this 1 i waited so long 2 see your opinions and no body answered me

so i kind of gave up on you

but i promiss that i'll write again
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة CuTe Youya

really, fabulous and emotional in a sort, I love it, I just adore it, oh god! that's great!!! keep on, waiting for your other pen's wonders!!!

in shaa ALLAH soon sis

thank you for stoping by

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة miss.cool

nice poem sis

keep it up
n do more

enjoyed readin it so much


peace

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thank you sooo much you're making me blush lol
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

i like it sweety
and i like your name
it's my style
keep going
don't deprive us your creative poems

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yeah that kind of explain why did we choose the same pseudo i guess

i'm glad you like it
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة قمر البتول

nice work
u did a good job tknx

thank yoou sister

i'm happy that you like it