Help Me Plzz

[zizoukml]

Hello!! i need Your help
the learning of the paragraph is : Next Days You'll be on holidays write a paragraph about what you have planned to do . Use the following notes
prepare a tent / bags full of different kinds of food / bottles of water and juice
special clothes / sport shoes
climb mountains / walk in the wood
take photos / write a holiday postcarde
Pllllzz help me i need it tomorrow

[zizoukml]

Pllzz i need it Tomorrow ... Pllz

[toulay]

Peace be upon you

as usual,this is a very simple paragraph

Next days,I will be on holidays, that is why I have many things to prepare.First of all,I have to prepare a tent because I will spend nights outside.Also,I have to take different kinds of food to eat welll,without forgetting water and juice.What is more?I'd better take my sport shoes,who knows maybe I will play football,and of course my special clothes.To enjoy my holidays,I will climb mountains because I'm fond of adventures.As well,walking in the woods,and watching the lovely nature.Finally,I will take some photos to send them to my pen pal friend.

Best of luck

[Hillin]

is that a homework lazyyy boy!
It sounds so
ok I wouldn't give you a well-written paragraph my son but i prefer to be a guide and you, you've to try to write it using your own words
Topic sentence: the main sentence that u're gonna to expand
start like this: Few days left and I'll be on holidays. I want to spend memorable days thus ..............
Suporting sentences: where will you spend it?
what will you do exactly during the vacation?
what're the things you need to spend very nice days ?
Useful ********:
- "your plans for the vacation" means the tense must be the FUTURE simple " will+verb"
-Sequencers: First, second, third......finally
First, then, next, after that, ......finally
Concluding sentence: one sentence as sum up , to conclude your paragraph
Best Luck son

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Peace be upon you

as usual,this is a very simple paragraph

Next days,I will be on holidays, that is why I have many things to prepare.First of all,I have to prepare a tent because I will spend nights outside.Also,I have to take different kinds of food to eat welll,without forgetting water and juice.What is more?I'd better take my sport shoes,who knows maybe I will play football,and of course my special clothes.To enjoy my holidays,I will climb mountains because I'm fond of adventures.As well,walking in the woods,and watching the lovely nature.Finally,I will take some photos to send them to my pen pal friend.

Best of luck

Thank you so much Toulay!