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2012-10-31, 14:17 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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Soledad -A Real Story
Hey guys. I'm new here. I hope we'll have a good time together. Here is the story of Soledad that I'v been posting on Blida's forum and now I want to share it with you. Hope You'll like it Soledad To be continued To be continued... . . . To be continued
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2012-10-31, 15:53 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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I know it's a little bit long. But read it as if it were episodes and I'll be posting new ones soon |
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2012-10-31, 21:57 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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2012-11-01, 11:55 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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the touching scenes when the child stood up to whisper something in soledad's ear I realized the scene like I am watching it directly and this is due to your fully described scenes. the matter of "Aunt Leila" is somehow unclear to me I am confused about what did you mean by: 1-she would bury her sorrow...her first love.the safety officer? 2-Is Miscipsa the outgrowth of Leila and that safety officer? I like the integration of french words this apply a beauty through the story. reading the last paragraph make me wonder about the memorable days she passed through! so I want to read the rest please I don't care how long it is just post it come on. actually I began writing a short story focusing on life of a young man living in USA then confronting some obstacles my first shot was something unregulated like I found myself telling the story but not talking in details and the use of detailed description like the Novella should be so I just had to change the way and back from the Zero point and I found another obstacle which is the places where the event should be you know USA is wide and in a small city there are a lot to talk about so at least I should have known about these stuffs I'm searching and trying to figure out some places and learn about them so as the work would be well formed. so any advices concerning this kind of writing? a question please: did you print it or not yet? Good Luck. |
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2012-11-02, 18:37 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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I'm SOOOOOOOO happy you liked it and your interest is an honor for me!
The Bacha (Soledad's father) refused aunt Leila's marriage with a security agent and therefore she married the first comer to forget all this painful past. So Micipsa (Soledad's cousin) is the son of aunt Leila from her marriage with this man, a man she accepted to mary to cope with her past. Aunt Leila is the sister of Bacha (Soledad's father). No it's not printed yet, I just write fragments now and then at night when feeling the inspiration lol As for the setting, you say you want to enlarge your knowledge about it and hence build the environment of the story and I think this is fine but not that necessary. Some of the best novels I have read, don't have a setting (or at least not a clear one). Now, if you decide to remain obscure about it you have to be very skillful to make your reader NOT on the absence of the settings but on the story itself (and here he or she might question yout choice: Did you neglect it or is it a wise choice? and why? and here is the interesting part). As a writer, you are free to manipulate the story the way you want (but skillfylly This story of Soledad that I'm writing is based on a real-life story but sometimes I need to change things, and the story never looks like what I have planned to write when I first took my pen. Sometimes we change names, places, neglect certain things on purpose to shift the reader's focus on something else Again, I'm very honored you're reading it and following it. That's very very encouraging |
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2012-11-02, 18:39 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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I'm SOOOOOOOO happy you liked it and your interest is an honor for me!
The Bacha (Soledad's father) refused aunt Leila's marriage with a security agent and therefore she married the first comer to forget all this painful past. So Micipsa (Soledad's cousin) is the son of aunt Leila from her marriage with this man, a man she accepted to mary to cope with her past. Aunt Leila is the sister of Bacha (Soledad's father). No it's not printed yet, I just write fragments now and then at night when feeling the inspiration lol As for the setting, you say you want to enlarge your knowledge about it and hence build the environment of the story and I think this is fine but not that necessary. Some of the best novels I have read, don't have a setting (or at least not a clear one). Now, if you decide to remain obscure about it you have to be very skillful to make your reader NOT on the absence of the settings but on the story itself (and here he or she might question yout choice: Did you neglect it or is it a wise choice? and why? and here is the interesting part). As a writer, you are free to manipulate the story the way you want (but skillfylly This story of Soledad that I'm writing is based on a real-life story but sometimes I need to change things, and the story never looks like what I have planned to write when I first took my pen. Sometimes we change names, places, neglect certain things on purpose to shift the reader's focus on something else Again, I'm very honored you're reading it and following it. That's very very encouraging |
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2012-11-02, 18:57 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | |||
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yeah don't worry and don't mind
my honor is to read stories of sons and daughters of my country what is the sense of reading mark twain or sue grafton or Francis scott fitzgerald and the american dream and the bla bla bla they're all psychos coz they have no good principals but reading a nowel written by a muslim is good maybe inside there are some purposes |
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2012-11-02, 19:02 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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by the way did you see the emission of (Fahrass)
I like it one day I saw a guest who was a girl studying in 1st year (lycée) and she wrote a novel in french and it was about a family living in USA ....etc I like this Emission it inspires me to write hhh |
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2012-11-02, 19:17 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | |||
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ohhhh you're gone now
but where is the rest of the story ^^ |
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2012-11-02, 19:28 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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May Allah bless you and reward you with the best.
Your words cheer me up ..really. Never saw that show but I obviously missed something. lol It's really nice to encourage young people to write. Even if I teach at the secondary school, I often bring short stories in English to my students and they kinda like it (they love it when you believe in them, in their talents to understand and produce something) By the way I have just read The Don Until I'm Gone It's AMAZING WAW It's a rap song (I never rapped -only in a listening session once with students- but when I was reading it I found myself rapping it lol This just means that it really rhymes!! WAW As for the rest of the story, an episode is to be posted tomorrow inchaAllah (finishing it tonight) Just hope you'll like it |
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2012-11-02, 19:36 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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I will like it of course
the beginning is pushing reader to see the rest believe me me my self If I read 5 pages of a book I'll finish it or i'll be sick and weird coz I can't pass it but your story is on the level believe it or not and that emission is called https://www.startimes.com/f.aspx?t=31579845 |
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2012-11-02, 19:39 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | |||
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Oooh taht's good you read the don until i'm gone |
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2012-11-05, 20:42 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | |||
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2012-11-14, 22:16 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | |||
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That's really a good story. I thought for a moment that I'm reading an English novel and not a story made by an Algerian woman. I'm really impressed by your level and the way you wrote it. What I liked most is the presence of the Algerian touch. I wish you'd always post your wondeful stories here
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2012-11-15, 11:03 | رقم المشاركة : 15 | |||
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nice story bro and welcome between us |
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