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2012-09-19, 23:31 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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My dead love
hello every one on this forum
it's my first time that i share what i write ..cuz i was scaring frm showin'em but yr amzing writings made me be brave to show my writings even they're so bad 'cause i know that the essentiel of showing'em is to make'em so good i'll not be angry of yr correction , so if u find anything wrong just corect me .. ... and this is one of my writings hoping it gets ur admiration .. .. Let me cry ,let some expressions write Cuz u've deprived me from my life's light Since u left me , i'm linving in darknesss like the night Cuz u've limitted all my chances to fight Haha..i was thinking that i'm yr dreams knight .. You told me[that] u loved me nd u ve lied Yeah, for our love i'd suicide I can even deat's vehicule ride I know it' not love it's a game so dont try to hide So just tell me ,, why u v made our love died waiting yr points of view about it
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2012-09-19, 23:37 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | ||||
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اقتباس:
i'll come reply after reading ^^ |
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2012-09-19, 23:40 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | ||||
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اقتباس:
hiiii bro
h r u ? wish ya doing fine .... i'm not a lair so believe me when i say ur poem is so beautiful do u know why ? ok i'll tell you a secret about writing poems don't tell any one ok ? hhhh just kidding ^^ ok look it's not about the words you put it's about the feelings you share .. and the more feelings are honest and strong the more your poem looked pretty amazing .... so don't say your poems are not good i bet you're a better writer than me ^^ so do never give up and you'll always keep getting better ^^ your bro jimmy ^^ |
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2012-09-19, 23:41 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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yeah i agree with bro jimmy
u can write alot but if there's no feelings there then ur poem shouldnt be as well and the poem is great good job bro keep it up peace |
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2012-09-19, 23:51 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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really .. |
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2012-09-19, 23:58 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | ||||
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^^ |
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2012-09-20, 12:38 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | ||||
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اقتباس:
u dont believe really?? wy would u think that |
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2012-09-20, 13:50 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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nice one bro keep writing |
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2012-10-12, 15:49 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | |||
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