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Mother

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قديم 2012-10-19, 18:18   رقم المشاركة : 1
معلومات العضو
Karim-Rap-4-Life
مشرف سابق
 
الصورة الرمزية Karim-Rap-4-Life
 

 

 
الأوسمة
العضو المميز لسنة 2013 وسام التميز في منتدى الإنجليزية المرتبة الثالثة 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي Mother



M
other

Verse 01
A hopeful make you warm in this cold world
When they Overtake you she can cure your hurt
Be careful watch yourself she’s the most Sensible
You will live unlucky don’t mess be responsible
Back to the childhood back to the old good days
Never complain that’s amazing never got Fazed
Oh! those great memories when we were lil babies
God save our Mothers the Dz great good ladies
But when I see some disobedient I fall in pieces
Mistreating their Moms Fearless of consequences
Though all bad deeds she still pray for your safety
Coz her heart bleeds she got plenty of love fancy
She feels great if all the family are around the table
Provide good, food and clean to make you stable
When you grow up 18 hanging with other teens
Ask you to stay away from fiends get what I mean
Her Nightmare when it’s so late you still outside
Afraid about you coz human being became so Wild
She’s holding her heart sitting on that old chair
If you got pain something inform her that’s Rare
When you’re in trouble she quickly feel that huh
All what I could say Mother is a gift from Allah


I love you Mother without you I would be none
I love you Mother without you I would be done
I love you Mother without you I would be gone


Verse 02
If I can’t see you why I should have that both eyes
With your smile I could find my goals and realize
Forgive me please forget that behaviours happened
Coz I faced my enemies getting my heart broken
So much pain you had to face in this difficult life
I stressed you a lot since the month number five
Mother all I wish for you is to reside in paradise
That’s For the well disciplined children you rise
Due to mama’s presence I became a grown man
Every day I’m Muslim appreciating the women
Now my mother pray for me pray for my safety
I beg you Please mama ask god to help and save me
Coz I see life going down some problems blown
Falling down for the unspoken love of the unknown
I’m sorry In case I did not wait my destiny and resist
Sometimes I’m faithless and regret why the hell I exist
The idea of suicide dominating me I can barely fuss it
I’m afraid of that day I trip the world ooh “karim does it”
I found myself all time travelling from the wall to wall
I don’t need looking at the bastards setting their goal
The ones with no level no good qualified personality
The ones who were spotted and given the responsibility
given the responsibility to lead us to lead persons like me
to lead persons like me to lead persons like me
to lead persons like me


I love you Mother without you I would be none
I love you Mother without you I would be done
I love you Mother without youI would be gone





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قديم 2012-10-19, 18:29   رقم المشاركة : 2
معلومات العضو
Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

Hi.............i'm glad to see that you are fine
it's been a while.........
...........
?did u get my reply
..............
i'm reading this one carefully and reply










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قديم 2012-10-19, 18:35   رقم المشاركة : 3
معلومات العضو
Karim-Rap-4-Life
مشرف سابق
 
الصورة الرمزية Karim-Rap-4-Life
 

 

 
الأوسمة
العضو المميز لسنة 2013 وسام التميز في منتدى الإنجليزية المرتبة الثالثة 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

Nice to see that Fadwa take your time ....still did not see your reply I'll see and back ok









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قديم 2012-10-19, 18:47   رقم المشاركة : 4
معلومات العضو
Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

Mother............what word will describe you
in what image shall i put you..........
mother............a touch of blessing
mother.............a woman like no other
mother ..........they always sacrify.........they always cry for us.......always pray for us
even while facing the UNKNOWN......that everybody fears
they are there for us
gave us life.........guided us to the right path
May Allah bless all our mothers in his paradise


i could see your coded message...........i get it
i knew it........and scilence is always the master
is scilence is the right thing to do
is there anything left worth to try
is it now time to give up

...............i don't know what to answer cuz....The dakness hits again


i wish to get some answers

----------------------
and..........congrats for the poem.................as great as usual










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قديم 2012-10-19, 18:48   رقم المشاركة : 5
معلومات العضو
Karim-Rap-4-Life
مشرف سابق
 
الصورة الرمزية Karim-Rap-4-Life
 

 

 
الأوسمة
العضو المميز لسنة 2013 وسام التميز في منتدى الإنجليزية المرتبة الثالثة 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

take a look .....









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قديم 2012-10-19, 19:10   رقم المشاركة : 6
معلومات العضو
Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

i'm having troubles with conex..........i couldn't check
i'll try again and reply










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قديم 2012-10-19, 21:13   رقم المشاركة : 7
معلومات العضو
Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
الصورة الرمزية Jimmy The Rap Soldie
 

 

 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life مشاهدة المشاركة
Hi everybopdy I wish you're doing good sorry I'm very late
I have a conex problem
enjoy;



Verse 01: 22
A hopeful make you warm in this cold world
When they Overtake you she can cure your hurt
Be careful watch yourself she’s the most Sensible
You will live unlucky don’t mess be responsible
Back to the childhood back to the old good days
Never complain that’s amazing never got Fazed
Oh! those great memories when we were lil babies
God save our Mothers the Dz great good ladies
But when I see some disobedient I fall in pieces
Mistreating their Moms Fearless of consequences
Though all bad deeds she still pray for your safety
Coz her heart bleeds she got plenty of love fancy
She feels great if all the family are around the table
Provide good, food and clean to make you stable
When you grow up 18 hanging with other teens
Ask you to stay away from fiends get what I mean
Her Nightmare when it’s so late you still outside
Afraid about you coz human being became so Wild
She’s holding her heart sitting on that old chair
If you got pain something inform her that’s Rare
When you’re in trouble she quickly feel that huh
All what I could say Mother is a gift from Allah

Chorus:
I love you Mother without you I would be none
I love you Mother without you I would be done
I love you Mother without you I would be gone

Verse 02: 22
If I can’t see you why I should have that both eyes
With your smile I could find my goals and realize
Forgive me please forget that behaviours happened
Coz I faced my enemies getting my heart broken
So much pain you had to face in this difficult life
I stressed you a lot since the month number five
Mother all I wish for you is to reside in paradise
That’s For the well disciplined children you rise
Due to mama’s presence I became a grown man
Every day I’m Muslim appreciating the women
Now my mother pray for me pray for my safety
I beg you Please mama ask god to help and save me
Coz I see life going down some problems blown
Falling down for the unspoken love of the unknown
I’m sorry In case I did not wait my destiny and resist
Sometimes I’m faithless and regret why the hell I exist
The idea of suicide dominating me I can barely fuss it
I’m afraid of that day I trip the world ooh “karim does it”
I found myself all time travelling from the wall to wall
I don’t need looking at the bastards setting their goal
The ones with no level no good qualified personality
The ones who were spotted and given the responsibility
given the responsibility to lead us to lead persons like me
to lead persons like me to lead persons like me
to lead persons like me

Chorus:
I love you Mother without you I would be none
I love you Mother without you I would be done
I love you Mother without you I would be gone






Dear mirror soul mate bro dear homie friend every thing
^^
you did a fabulous piece of work my brother
concerning my favorite topic
THE MOTHER
the most precious gift
and priceless bless
...........................

Coz I faced my enemies getting my heart broken

...........................


code decoded

.....
my sister fadwa
may be silence isn't the only way
but silence is the way some prefer
or have to prefer
......
great job bro
always on top
^^









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قديم 2012-10-20, 12:33   رقم المشاركة : 8
معلومات العضو
Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

my sister fadwa
may be silence isn't the only way
but silence is the way some prefer
or have to prefer
......

if scilence is a choice to make .........
then in this case
scilence = suicide
and you know this more than i do


i tried to put my self in your shoes
and the pain was unbeleivable
i understand everything


but keep in mind that no one will blame you........you just take that step
it can never be late


...........................
Forgive me brother










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قديم 2012-10-20, 13:40   رقم المشاركة : 9
معلومات العضو
Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
الصورة الرمزية Jimmy The Rap Soldie
 

 

 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
my sister fadwa
may be silence isn't the only way
but silence is the way some prefer
or have to prefer
......

if scilence is a choice to make .........
then in this case
scilence = suicide
and you know this more than i do


i tried to put my self in your shoes
and the pain was unbeleivable
i understand everything


but keep in mind that no one will blame you........you just take that step
it can never be late


...........................
Forgive me brother
silence is suicide
...........
i can't figure out any thing any longer
silence has to take over
that pain is nothing ... if you read the ballad of a dead soldier
.........
but
the bright side is still bright
forever ..... cuz Allah do never let down
every thing takes place for a reason
^^









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قديم 2012-10-20, 13:44   رقم المشاركة : 10
معلومات العضو
Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

So ......................you left me no choice










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قديم 2012-10-20, 13:52   رقم المشاركة : 11
معلومات العضو
Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
الصورة الرمزية Jimmy The Rap Soldie
 

 

 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
So ......................you left me no choice

my darling sister ........... silence is the king in one case
only in mine
silence kills ...... i somehow feel you're going through the same
and i feel like you taking a look at my pain
have reminded you of yours ........ i apologize for that
I'm really deeply sorry for that
you're a precious darling sister
but i should never put that weight on your shoulders
i didn't want to
but you insisted .......... and I'm so sorry for that sorrow my pain have brought into your soul
that's why I'm being selfish and keeping that pain top my self
cus it's way heavy than any one but me can lift i
t









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قديم 2012-10-20, 13:58   رقم المشاركة : 12
معلومات العضو
Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

You know what.......who sad you're a weight....
come on bro ........pain is heavy to be lifted
we should share it..........that makes me feel better
yeah..........you're right...........i'm taking a close look
i'm somehow near that hallway you're walking in
and you're not leaving me any choice but following you










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قديم 2012-10-20, 14:12   رقم المشاركة : 13
معلومات العضو
Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
الصورة الرمزية Jimmy The Rap Soldie
 

 

 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
You know what.......who sad you're a weight....
come on bro ........pain is heavy to be lifted
we should share it..........that makes me feel better
yeah..........you're right...........i'm taking a close look
i'm somehow near that hallway you're walking in
and you're not leaving me any choice but following you

i am sister ... you can't believe how heavy it is .... and you're having enough pain
I'm disappearing into that hallway cus it's my fate .... even sooner or later .... but don't get into that silent hallway it's dangerous
don't let your pain get you in it .... let me into your pain let's defeat it










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قديم 2012-10-20, 14:21   رقم المشاركة : 14
معلومات العضو
Black_Poison
عضو محترف
 
الصورة الرمزية Black_Poison
 

 

 
الأوسمة
المرتبة الثانية 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

i still beleive in you...........it's not your fate
it can never be.........let's defeat both our scilence
let's share them both in the same time
i beleive in you..........more than i beleive in my self
you're giving up.............i'm giving up
you dissapear in that hallway........i'll walk there for sure










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قديم 2012-10-20, 14:30   رقم المشاركة : 15
معلومات العضو
Jimmy The Rap Soldie
عضو مميّز
 
الصورة الرمزية Jimmy The Rap Soldie
 

 

 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison مشاهدة المشاركة
i still beleive in you...........it's not your fate
it can never be.........let's defeat both our scilence
let's share them both in the same time
i beleive in you..........more than i beleive in my self
you're giving up.............i'm giving up
you dissapear in that hallway........i'll walk there for sure

i always believed in you .... but it still might be my fate
i'm not giving up ....... so you're not giving up
let's share defeat both our silences
?
ok ... let's light the hall way together
but plzzzzzzzz don't u give up
you can't give up
i won't let you give u
p









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