وضععية ادماااَجية في الانجليزية

[عاشقة علم]

مرحبا هذه وضعية ادماجية في الانجليزية لقد اعددتها بنفسي
واتمنى ان تعطوني رايكم بخصوصها

All the people would like to listen or read the news online . Newspeaper or nzws can be online so easy and i prefer that because it didn"t take much time . All thet jeust beause there are internet in the world and ii thinkfull for that

[hadjer.alg]

وضعية مقبولةامنحك
4.5/7

[المداينية26]

All the people would like to listen or read the online new . when the newzs or newspeper became online. they will so easy ..and i
prefer that because they didn't take much time . All that just beause there are internet in the world and i thankful for that

[fatma258]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ناجو2016

All the people would like to listen or read the online news . when the news become online. they will do that easier than reading newspapers ..and i
prefer that because they didn't take too much time and money . All that just beause there is internet in the world and i'm thankful for that

اعتقد تصحيحك مثالي ولكن حسب ما اظن نقولو i'm thankful وليس i thankful
وايضا هناك بعض التعديلات الاخرى التي وضعتها
ملاحطة :
في اي حالة نستعمل there is or there are ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

There is + singulier. Ex: There is a little bird.

There are + pluriel. Ex: There are two bad boys.

so .....i like you paragraph
but i think that it's too short
4/7

[كاتمة الاحزان]

مقبولة يعني 4/7