The Black Butterfly

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peace people
small traps could cost us a lots ;so we gotta be careful also wounds of summer are killing so forget them and enjoy your winter ;enjoy reading as well^^
hope you like it ...

• The Black Butterfly

As a tipsy man in a moonless night
A butterfly ;is flying with no direction as there’s no light
Straining its pale wings under the rain
After it lost its colors life and death are the same
Breaking the nature’s laws
Proving that even the black glows
Dreaming about an empty dream
Trying to cry out a silent scream
It’s shaking ;holding weighty secrets along
Getting tired of the pretense of being strong
It’s wounded ;summer’s wounds can’t be cured in winter
It’s astray ;it can barely hear the wind’s whisper
It was aimed to reach the farthest stars
Now ;it’s following the past’s scars
As it belongs to the past ;it threw the future away
In its depths ;the urge of dying is increasing day after day
Sacrificing its dreams ;waving its wings in farewell
Rains are about to stop ;the butterfly hears the loud ringing of the death’s bell
Its wings are tingling and stumbling ;it’s really a hard destiny
The pure smell after the downpour declares the end of its journey
« the breeze is so cold ;the way was so long and the end is so soon »
Eventually ;through that thorny long way
It reaches the river where it used to play
« There ;dawn has just emerged ;with the first fleeting beam it fades away ;;;taking along the heavy burdens of past ;the indelible warped memories ;sadness and pain it shouldered ;even summer’s wounds »
THE END

[نميرة 08]

Peace be upon u ^^
Hallo Salma How are u ?
OMG! I like it very much <3
And your title caught my attention ....
Keep writing I'm always waiting for your new
Good Luck In Your Studies ~!!

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Peace be upon u ^^
Hallo Salma How are u ?
OMG! I like it very much <3
And your title caught my attention ....
Keep writing I'm always waiting for your new
Good Luck In Your Studies ~!!

Hallos sweet zahra i'm doing welll ;thnx for asking sis
thank you for dropping by sis n for the sweet comment ;it means a lot for me ^^
best of luck for you too ^^

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hello I'm very very very sorry to be late to reply the first day when saw it I wanted to read it slowly and define some words I really forgot their meaning you know I'm gettin g old hhhh then when wanted to reply the conex became amazingly sick hhhhh then day after day I totally forgot to reply I really forgot that there is a new topic and it's not only a normal topic nah it's a kind of a poem that we need to pay an attention to.
well I liked it too much and I found so so real of reality though it appears a fiction; it's not different from the previous one Graveyard of Memories" dealing with the same theme of a person leaving a bad memories behind she felt pain got wounds tripped and moved to another place but still holding the past scars. it's a sad one really sad
I guess this one belongs to some one.
this is a piece of art keep it up Intisar u r doing good

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life

Hello I'm very very very sorry to be late to reply the first day when saw it I wanted to read it slowly and define some words I really forgot their meaning you know I'm gettin g old hhhh then when wanted to reply the conex became amazingly sick hhhhh then day after day I totally forgot to reply I really forgot that there is a new topic and it's not only a normal topic nah it's a kind of a poem that we need to pay an attention to.
well I liked it too much and I found so so real of reality though it appears a fiction; it's not different from the previous one Graveyard of Memories" dealing with the same theme of a person leaving a bad memories behind she felt pain got wounds tripped and moved to another place but still holding the past scars. it's a sad one really sad
I guess this one belongs to some one.
this is a piece of art keep it up Intisar u r doing good

it's ok bro i know iknow and nah you're still the teacher n i learn from you new things always ;;n yeah conx is insane only in this forum it's so loud ;;
indeed you're able to find out the true story ,a girls 's story who belongs to the past n in the end she came back to the same place she came from holding the same scars the same woundes that she was trying to forget but she overlooks a small trap" she forgot that summer's wounds that can't be cured in winter " ;n small traps cost a lots thus she loses every thing the only things that remain are things she was trying to abandoning them '
thank you brother ^^î really appreciate your passing by your encouragement will push me to improve .

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

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it's ok bro i know iknow and nah you're still the teacher n i learn from you new things always ;;n yeah conx is insane only in this forum it's so loud ;;

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indeed you're able to find out the true story ,a girls 's story who belongs to the past n in the end she came back to the same place she came from holding the same scars the same woundes that she was trying to forget but she overlooks a small trap" she forgot that summer's wounds that can't be cured in winter " ;n small traps cost a lots thus she loses every thing the only things that remain are things she was trying to abandoning them '
thank you brother ^^î really appreciate your passing by your encouragement will push me to improve .

the problem of this forum is that it's so slow when you have
فوري
an I read a topic about it before I don't remember where
about the poem the writer knows everything
the reader can cover only 50 % at most
so good luck for your next Inshallah

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life

the problem of this forum is that it's so slow when you have
فوري
an I read a topic about it before I don't remember where
about the poem the writer knows everything
the reader can cover only 50 % at most
so good luck for your next Inshallah

Indeed the forum is really driving me crazy
anyway;;
yeah i like when i write things that make the readers think about it n give me various opinions ,it's great when someone focus on what you 've written ;;;thank you again brother .....inshallah ^^