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2013-06-06, 21:06 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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Spirits call
Every time i sit by myself ...
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2013-06-06, 21:14 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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" one day I'll get my lover" |
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2013-06-06, 21:32 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |||
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"best friends" |
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2013-06-06, 21:42 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | |||
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"I'll forget you" |
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2013-06-11, 16:09 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | |||
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nice laguag.e, I like the way you describe the whole thing, it makes it easy to imagine, easy to feel the same, such a powerful talent... I wonder if you could try using it describing maybe some lighter moods, brighter feelings?i |
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2013-06-14, 16:23 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | |||
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Of course , I'll try to write sth more happy and bright ..... Soooon |
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2013-06-15, 19:54 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | |||
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hey I liked that pieces of poems so much they're so great I'm sure you're going to develop it more than this I noticed that you play with the rhymes in very nice way
PS: make sure that your lines are similar in length it's not necessary but this way u feel the rhymes are paralleled give much regular tempo reading them Keep it up |
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2013-06-15, 21:26 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | |||
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Thank you and about PS , I don't give much attention to the length , I try to write like a short story in a poem ... And I'll know more about poetry next year I'm an english student , I knew some bout it this year and I'll study it deeply |
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2013-06-16, 15:46 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | |||
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haha I liked them so much |
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2013-06-16, 20:50 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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I couldnt get it about the length of the lines ... Well you mean that in a poem I must have like over 20 line? |
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2013-06-17, 18:54 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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yes I mean the third one if lines are equal it will be so nice but it's not important i just propose it for you and you're free of course and about writing I just feel lazy to write again i still got two poems to write but they're left like they're since a long time ago and singing i just don't like to sing anymore your idea is so great but I can't even if I sing I leave em home no body could listen to them so all i can say is sorry i can't help. |
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2013-06-17, 19:01 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | |||
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read this it may helps |
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2013-06-18, 00:09 | رقم المشاركة : 13 | |||
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Owh ! It's ok then ... And about the link u gave me , it is the same lesson we studied this year in the module of literature ! So I got the experience but I need to study poetry deeply ! My teacher is helping me hehe |
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2013-06-19, 17:34 | رقم المشاركة : 14 | |||
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aaaaaaaahaaah so you are telling me that I can teach in university hehehe kidding around |
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2013-06-19, 21:00 | رقم المشاركة : 15 | |||
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Ok , I'll try to take a look... About studying poetry I'll try but I know I have no chance to be a poet in Algeria Hhhhhh ESP in English ... And thx a lot.. It's sure u can be a teacher in university Hhhh our teacher are older than us with 3years only they have no experience. But they to show themselves |
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