what about me!!

[amoula m.l.a]

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[ikram91]

i often think of him when he's away,,waw its very touching thank you

[وينري]

I can't deny that it moved my heart, reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally thank you

[amoula m.l.a]

hey girls...thnx allllot for ur participations & ur comments...
it's really nice to c ur sweet words
c u more
moula

[bila00b]

Amoula ...as always ..you are the bomb ...that was extremly good ...keep going on

[Mansouri1991]

thanks . ....... very well

[دموع الوفاء]

i really get touched when i read ur words
cus sometimes our daily life keep us away and injured our sentiments.....and that really make us dreaming to be like a bird ,flying in the sky to see the light of the stars and tolk with the moon
thanks sister
salam

[ينابيع الصفاء]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amoula m.l.a

what about me!!!
i want 2 be just like a bee
i wanna fly & open my eye
people whom i love will go away
one after one will say good bye
some of them will change their way
the others too will try
but what about me!!
that bee,why i don't try
to change my way
why i don't try to be a bird to fly
to live between moon,stars & sky
to cry cry & cry
coz i think i'm gonna be sad..i think it's 2day
yeah,the person that's driving me mad is going away
he's got a ticket to ride,but he don't care
my baby don't knw why he's riding so high
he ought to think right,he ought to do right by me
god bless him that's all wht cn i say...until i find a way
yesterday all my troubles seemed so far away
now it looks as though they'r here to stay
oh i'm yearning to yesterday
why he has to go?
i don't knw he wouldn't say
i really long to yesterday
love was such an easy game to play
now i need a place to hide away
i'll say the only words
i knw that he'll understand
i'm hoping he'll knw wht i mean
hey listen my friends!i mean by my future
something very precious..if it cn be said why not 'treasure'
where's he?does he still exist
does he think of me
i often think of him when he's away
i esteem him highly more than he imagines
tell me my friends..where cn i find him?
does he live in an isolated island?
does he still reciprocate the same feelings as mine?
how long cn i walk to reach him??
is he still alive??
am in a tight situation
wht r my chances
wht's the good of soooooooo much pain????
written by amoula
waiting 4 ur comments

just wow
try not to stop writing because you unusual
what a talent you have
it's like a song
britney spears will sing it amoula
thanks alot
never let up

[الهام الحياة]

wowwwwwwwwww
very nice peom
it touched my heart
thank you darling

[الشاوية الخنشلية]

frienkly good work thank u

[elmoukhlis]

it's really fantastic! keep on

[buffy 23]

you write it from your heart and not from your mind .....and this this is the secret of writing ..really it talks about the reality .but with all your great words

[هـمس الـمعانـي]

thanks . ....... very well

[amoula m.l.a]

heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey guys...thnx a lot for that great & amazing comments
i'm really glad to c ur passages
thnx for encouraging me
c u with new topics

[الامير-الحزين]

so saddddddddddddddddd but so niceeeeeeeeeeeeee keeeeeeeeeeeep workinggggggggggggg