Mr Lonely

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ali gourgache

i feel like i'm inside your heart since i felt that the poem is from the bottom of your heart..........i feel that you are innocent in a way ...please don't let your emotions drive you for a vague world..........i really get admired by the poem .....keep doing well and i hope that you've got me well....Good Luck

yeah man thank you you're so appreciated...you know sometimes you have to write and talk to others tyo avoid your pain but it is not the task that make me loose my personality....the world is nothing for me I like my brothers and sisters as the ones here in the djelfa forum...they are a good persons......because of that i publish these kinds of my writings........the real man here is the one who love by his heart but contributing his brain....because nothing good without the balance of the heart and brain.....so thank you agiang brother you're so good persons .

[حكاية قلب]

yaaay
i looooved it
it so so so sweet cute poem
i like this kind of poems

keep on writing it
i'll be waiting

^^
ThanK You
3>

[maymay]

I m starting to discover different sides in your writings,I ll keep my comment for a later time

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay

I m starting to discover different sides in your writings,I ll keep my comment for a later time

hhh yeah you are welcome...I just want to inform you that I write three kinds of poems
1_Love poems but rarely
2_Social poems and problems
3_Gangsta Life

but I love to write social ones

[maymay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

hhh yeah you are welcome...I just want to inform you that I write three kinds of poems
1_Love poems but rarely
2_Social poems and problems
3_Gangsta Life

but I love to write social ones

g r e a t

[dahmane78]

il y a vraiment une variation dans vos poèmes entre la romantique et la révolte

[سارة1995]

]It's amazing and wonderful poem

[ابتساام]

wow it's great
i can feel:
you are very sad but don't worry every thing will change

[ابتساام]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة karim_rap_4_life

yeah man thank you you're so appreciated...you know sometimes you have to write and talk to others tyo avoid your pain but it is not the task that make me loose my personality....the world is nothing for me i like my brothers and sisters as the ones here in the djelfa forum...they are a good persons......because of that i publish these kinds of my writings........the real man here is the one who love by his heart but contributing his brain....because nothing good without the balance of the heart and brain.....so thank you agiang brother you're so good persons .

[Black_Poison]

nice poem as allways
i wrote apoem like that
with the same idea
except for the volcano
hhhh

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

nice poem as allways
i wrote apoem like that
with the same idea
except for the volcano
hhhh

I've the pleasure to read it maybe we'll mix them who knows hhhhhh

[the fly boy]

I'll reply
soon

[.kiki]

you really can express yourself in a verygood way.. you have talent..
you need a little work.. but you're good
I like it
!so thnx !

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the fly boy

I'll reply
soon

Yeah I'll be waiting for your reply bro

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة .kiki

you really can express yourself in a verygood way.. you have talent..
you need a little work.. but you're good
I like it
!so thnx !

you're welcome and thank you or passing actually i'm planning to make a little work but not soon hhh thank you