The newest poem of cute

[cute_angel]

peace be upon you

i'm sorry I didn't write this poem in the topic of our creations because I saw that there is no right to put comments

but I need comments and critics

this is the poem I hope you'll like it

Farewell

The snow showers the icy land

And the wind allows me to send

My word on a wave's hand

To reach the ocean's end

Where it can knock the doors of my friend

Who's sitting on the golden sand

And the sea_****ls in behind

Just as a heroine of a legend




Aflying letters on the birds wings to say farewell

Which is a magic spell

From a deep tears_well

Just to say and tell

How many times I'm gonna drill



Your name not just one

Time even the distance is a shoot of a gun

That's gonna kill my life's joy and fun

i'll call you untill the night will run

and the day comes with it's sun