My second*stupid* poem

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Hello everyone ,

I decided to make a second poem , because i liked the first one =)

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School is a place of learning
but it sucks because you get up in the early morning
I enter the stupid hall
and sit on my chair near the wall
I have no idea what the teacher is talking about
and i feel like i want to shout
He is still talking
it isn't shocking
Because i got used to it
but i really want to quit
The clock is still ticking
but something is missing
There is no cheer in here
however the end of it is near
In few weeks we will have a test
we will try to do our best
But still,we are stressed
and we seriously need a rest

[miss.cool]

hhhhhhh so funny

yeah its soon gonna end



why u call it stupid??
its not at all

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة miss.cool

hhhhhhh so funny

yeah its soon gonna end



why u call it stupid??
its not at all

hhhhh
It's stupid because it took too much time

[miss.cool]

hhhhhhh

but its awesome

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة miss.cool

hhhhhhh

but its awesome

thanks
glad you think so

[Black_Poison]

hhhhhhhhhhhh
really cute and funny
you are tallented girl
any girl in your age won't be able to write something like that
keep it up sweetheart

[maymay]

oh common.you're still tooooo young to hate school...wait to see what's coming hhhh....I mean really,you should enjoy those days,they are one of the best memories you'll have when you grow older sis,ok?so best wishes for your BEM and enjoy your life....

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Black_Poison

hhhhhhhhhhhh
really cute and funny
you are tallented girl
any girl in your age won't be able to write something like that
keep it up sweetheart

Thanks
i think that writing a poem doesn't take much,just a little imagination,,then let your pen go,or in this case,your keyboard?

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay

oh common.you're still tooooo young to hate school...wait to see what's coming hhhh....I mean really,you should enjoy those days,they are one of the best memories you'll have when you grow older sis,ok?so best wishes for your BEM and enjoy your life....

Yes,i heard of what's coming,but for now,i'll just stick to the Bem
thank you ☺

[rola.29]

hi ikram,
i agree with black...(fadwa isn't it).. you should keep writing
no matter how long it takes.. the main thing is taht you'll feel happy and satifdied when you finish writing it
Good luck... don't call your poems stpid again ok?? see you nearly

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rola.29

hi ikram,
i agree with black...(fadwa isn't it).. you should keep writing
no matter how long it takes.. the main thing is taht you'll feel happy and satifdied when you finish writing it
Good luck... don't call your poems stpid again ok?? see you nearly

Thank you

[spy4me]

hi ikram
well, im glad to say this is a very lovely poem, why? because such poem with simple diction and simple theme is the first step for excellent poems
i remember at your age i couldnt make even a good paragraph
so keep writing and read also to improve your vocabulary and style then inshallah you will be a good and prolific writer and poet
remember never try to compare yourself with the others, you'll have your own style
it's better that we call it an ambitious poem rather because you look a promising poet
may Allah help you
peace

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة spy4me

hi ikram
well, im glad to say this is a very lovely poem, why? because such poem with simple diction and simple theme is the first step for excellent poems
i remember at your age i couldnt make even a good paragraph
so keep writing and read also to improve your vocabulary and style then inshallah you will be a good and prolific writer and poet
remember never try to compare yourself with the others, you'll have your own style
it's better that we call it an ambitious poem rather because you look a promising poet
may Allah help you
peace

thank you for the awesome comment
nah,i wanna keep it as a hobby,i started poetry two days ago xD
i'll try to work w<ith your advice though,inshallah i will improve

[نهـــى]

wonderful words and so funny

and it's not stupid at allll

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ❀نُـهَـ｡◕‿◕｡ـــى❀

wonderful words and so funny

and it's not stupid at allll

Thank you =))