i need your opinion about this

[nasiroo]

I like it

[جنة الفردوسْ]

i like ur words i felt that they are from the deep of ur heart....good job

well i've some remarkes....it's better to say i look into ur eyes....we say maybe not my be.....

[smouadji18]

i just noticed a mistake i hope u will correct it :
you say : i dont know what it is , and NOT ; ...what is it
otherwise its goood continue

[أميرة مملكة السعادة]

thanx alot friends that's so kind of u i really thank u