صفحة خاصة بالإنجليزية

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

الدرس ليس عن tell و told و إنما عن tell و say و الفرق بينهما

to say something to someone but to tell someone something

for example

i say "hello " to my friend

i tell my friend that i was ill yesterday

in arabic

say يعني يقول

tell يعني يخبر

هل فهمت

أستبعد تماما أن يطرح هذا السؤال في امتحان الشهادة

؟

نعم فهمت...

شكرا جزيلا و بارك الله فيك استاذنا الفاضل

.....

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فهمت انت ايضا اختي ريان

[الجوهرة الرمادية]

hi silina...
thank you for your last letter .. i hope to be fine
-my last holiday was on djijle i traveled there with my sister at the farm of my grand parent
the farm was very big and beautiful . we founed the comfort there ... the pure air and a warm sun
-we help our grand parents on the farm and at home because they can not do all
Businesses
we stayed there during two weeks ..
i liked these holiday and i hope to return there with my family

yours mano


اتمنى ان تصححها لي استاذة

هي اجابتي على الجزء الثاني من امتحان شهادة التعليم المتوسط

2011

ارجوا ان تضع لي العلامة ان امكن

[الجوهرة الرمادية]

hi nesrine...
thank you for your last letter..i am very happy for this news
i hope to come with your sister lina....
i will visit with you to many places in contantin like gantrate lhbal ..djbal alwahche ..islamic university and mosque amir abdlkabar....
i 'm sure that you will lik it spicially we will meet my friends sounia and marwa and you will take many photoes with us
waiting for you
yours.......

اتمنى التصحيح من فضلكم ..
هي اجابتي على part 2 bem 2010
تعبيري ممل و لكن من فضلك ضع لي العلامة المناسبة حتى اعرف مستواي و شكرا

[الجوهرة الرمادية]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الجوهرة الرمادية

their are a lot means of transport but i prefer the plane because it is comfortable and very conviniant for me specially i like so much birds in the sky
the plane is very expensive ....it help you to drowing in another world between the clouds
the hosts of plane are very nice ..they work sincerly and regularity ....
and
for these reason i love traval buy plane
..

..

هذه اجابتي على وضعية شهادة التعليم المتوسط 2008

ارجوا ان تحصححها لي استاذي ( اذا كان لي هناك مانع ان تضع لي العلامة من فضلك)

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الجوهرة الرمادية

hi silina...
thank you for your last letter .. i hope to be fine
-my last holiday was on djijle i traveled there with my sister at the farm of my grand parent
the farm was very big and beautiful . we founed the comfort there ... the pure air and a warm sun
-we help our grand parents on the farm and at home because they can not do all
Businesses
we stayed there during two weeks ..
i liked these holiday and i hope to return there with my family

yours mano


اتمنى ان تصححها لي استاذة

هي اجابتي على الجزء الثاني من امتحان شهادة التعليم المتوسط

2011

ارجوا ان تضع لي العلامة ان امكن

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الجوهرة الرمادية

hi nesrine...
thank you for your last letter..i am very happy for this news
i hope to come with your sister lina....
i will visit with you to many places in contantin like gantrate lhbal ..djbal alwahche ..islamic university and mosque amir abdlkabar....
i 'm sure that you will lik it spicially we will meet my friends sounia and marwa and you will take many photoes with us
waiting for you
yours.......

اتمنى التصحيح من فضلكم ..
هي اجابتي على part 2 bem 2010
تعبيري ممل و لكن من فضلك ضع لي العلامة المناسبة حتى اعرف مستواي و شكرا

teacher pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

good afternoon sir
how are u

we miss your subjects and activities

this is a situation of integgeration about the pollution and what we should do to avoide this problem

ihope that you will see it and correct it

Nowadays .the nature suffer from many diseases and the main illness is the pollution
the origine of this problem is the men who neglect the nature and think just of his owen business

this problem kills the animals and destroy anything green and causes a lot of disease to the men
and make the world in a big trouble

to avoide this problem first of all we must be concious person then we must clean our envirement
second thing we must plant trees because ih is so important because it gives us the oxygen
in audition we should re use botteles plastics and glasses moreover we must set a strict rules to cure the pollution

in conclusion .we must clean our nature because clean nature means a concious person

i hope that i didn't make a lot of mistakes
and plz sir dont forget my question about letter

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

good afternoon sir
how are u

we miss your subjects and activities

this is a situation of integgeration about the pollution and what we should do to avoide this problem

ihope that you will see it and correct it

nowadays .the nature suffer from many diseases and the main illness is the pollution
the origine of this problem is the men who neglect the nature and think just of his owen business

this problem kills the animals and destroy anything green and causes a lot of disease to the men
and make the world in a big trouble

to avoide this problem first of all we must be concious person then we must clean our envirement
second thing we must plant trees because ih is so important because it gives us the oxygen
in audition we should re use botteles plastics and glasses moreover we must set a strict rules to cure the pollution

in conclusion .we must clean our nature because clean nature means a concious person

i hope that i didn't make a lot of mistakes
and plz sir dont forget my question about letter

سبقتني يا خنساء هههه


سأضع التعبير الخاص بي حالا

[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

سبقتني يا خنساء هههه


سأضع التعبير الخاص بي حالا

i'am waiting for your paragraph

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

i'am waiting for your paragraph

لقد وضعته اختي

هو مختصر جدااا

[~نسآئم الصبآح ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

good afternoon sir
how are u

we miss your subjects and activities

this is a situation of integgeration about the pollution and what we should do to avoide this problem

ihope that you will see it and correct it

Nowadays .the nature suffer from many diseases and the main illness is the pollution
the origine of this problem is the men who neglect the nature and think just of his owen business

this problem kills the animals and destroy anything green and causes a lot of disease to the men
and make the world in a big trouble

to avoide this problem first of all we must be concious person then we must clean our envirement
second thing we must plant trees because ih is so important because it gives us the oxygen
in audition we should re use botteles plastics and glasses moreover we must set a strict rules to cure the pollution

in conclusion .we must clean our nature because clean nature means a concious person

i hope that i didn't make a lot of mistakes
and plz sir dont forget my question about letter

this is my paragraph
plz sir correct it

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

this is my paragraph
plz sir correct it

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300 مشاهدة المشاركة
good afternoon sir
how are u

we miss your subjects and activities

this is a situation of integgeration about the pollution and what we should do to avoide this problem

ihope that you will see it and correct it

Nowadays , nature suffers from many problems and the main one is pollution
the origine of this problem is man who neglects nature and thinks just of his own business

this problem kills the animals and destroys anything green , causes a lot of diseases to man
and puts the world in a big trouble

to avoid this problem, first of all we must be concious and we must clean our environment
Secondly, we must plant trees because it is so important since they give us oxygen
in addition ,we should reuse plastic and glasses. Moreover we must set strict rules to fight pollution

In conclusion .we must clean our nature because clean nature means aware people

i hope that i didn't make a lot of mistakes
and plz sir dont forget my question about letter

Your paragraph is better now

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة farah28300

good afternoon sir
how are u

we miss your subjects and activities

this is a situation of integgeration about the pollution and what we should do to avoide this problem

ihope that you will see it and correct it

peace be upon you

Nowadays , the nature suffers from many diseases(why diseases,I think it's inappropriate) and the main illness is the (say directly pollution)pollution
the origin of this problem is the men who neglect the nature ,and think just of his own business

this problem kills the (the same remark why the say directly animals)animals ,and(here omit and because you are going to add another idea) destroys anything(normally,everything is better) green ,and (the same remark put only a comma not and)causes a lot of diseases to the men(I prefer to people
and makes the world in a big trouble ,

to avoid this problem first of all we must be conscious persons then we must clean our environment.
second thing, we must plant trees because they are so important because (to avoid repetition ,it's better to write since) they give us the (again,why the say directly oxygen) oxygen
in addition,we should re use plastic bottles ,and glasses. Moreover,we must set a(pay attention,you said rules not rule why the article a) strict rules to cure(it's better to say get rid of) the (no need for the)pollution

as a conclusion .we must clean our nature because clean nature means a conscious person or you can say mind

i hope that i didn't make a lot of mistakes
and plz sir dont forget my question about letter

as an advice,try to be brief and concise to avoid mistakes
best of luck

[~ دروب الخير ~]

امنى ان تضع لنا استاذ الحل النموذجي لهذا الموضوع

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بالانسبة الى الوضعية ،، هل تكفي 10 اسطر يعني ؟؟؟

[~ دروب الخير ~]

السلام عليكم استاذنا الفاضل ....


اامنى ان تصحح لي هذا التعبير ! و يتمركز موضوعه حول التلوث البيئي .....

no one can deny that pollution is a dangrous disaster...
nowaday..all the organisms suffer with the pollution
....and this is result of throuwing waste ..negligence and technological development...so we must keep our environment for
our safety from illnesses and because our world is in danger


التعبير مختصر جدا

ارجوا التصحيح

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

السلام عليكم استاذنا الفاضل ....


اامنى ان تصحح لي هذا التعبير ! و يتمركز موضوعه حول التلوث البيئي .....

no one can deny that pollution is a dangrous disaster...
Nowaday..all the organisms suffer with the pollution
....and this is result of throuwing waste ..negligence and technological development...so we must keep our environment for
our safety from illnesses and because our world is in danger


التعبير مختصر جدا

ارجوا التصحيح

هذا التعبير من فضلكم

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

السلام عليكم استاذنا الفاضل ....


اامنى ان تصحح لي هذا التعبير ! و يتمركز موضوعه حول التلوث البيئي .....

no one can deny that pollution is a dangrous disaster...
nowaday..all the organisms suffer with the pollution
....and this is result of throuwing waste ..negligence and technological development...so we must keep our environment for
our safety from illnesses and because our world is in danger


التعبير مختصر جدا

ارجوا التصحيح

Peace be upon you
I will correct if nobody minds

well,the first sentence you said disaster,it's better to say phenomenon
the second sentence,suffer from not with
we say suffer from pollution then put a comma,and this is resulted from throwing waste
concerning throwing with o not ou
then put then put a comma after throwing ,negligence,and technological development
then So capiltalized after it we put a comma
So,we must keep our environment clean for our safety or you can say that to prevent from illnesses then carry on your sentence

best of luck