Check the Mistake

[cute_angel]

Thank you very much for that extreme explanation I think I've made you tired

sorry
Yeah as you said but for hair I was a bit confused but it's ok now

He is a fat man

this word can be replaced by an other word just for the sake of not hurting poeple's feelings

[hairless17]

I am not sure but I think we say little boy

[cute_angel]

no not that word

[hairless17]

I think that we say
an over weigher

[cute_angel]

yes it is an over weight

[hairless17]

If I was you , I would do it in a different way

[cute_angel]

If I were you I would do it in a different way

I saw a lot of deers and strange sheeps in the zoom

[hairless17]

I saw a lot of deers and strange sheeps at the zoo

She wrote two letters use a strange colour.

[cute_angel]

Still two other mistakes in the previous sentence

I saw a lot of deers and strange sheeps in the zoom

She wrote two letters using a strange colour

[hairless17]

I saw many deers and a strange sheep in the zoo.

[cute_angel]

still an other mistake

[hairless17]

the full stop at the end
isn't it ?

[cute_angel]

no not that

[hairless17]

can you tell me the mistake i can't find it

[cute_angel]

the mistake is that the word deer doesn't take an s it's uncountable noun