Written Expression

[silver3100]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة younes01

In many parts of the world , Millions of children are engaged in hazardous situations or conditions , such as working in mines , working with chemicals and pesticides in agriculture or working with dangerous machinery
The exploitation , deprivation , humiliation , illiteracy , violence, and bad conditions ; this is the words that can explain the situation of this kind of children , this features obligate us beg this question : how long the humanity see this images ? and what we should to do ?
We must reduce and stop this abuse , the organizations like UNICEF should be more interactive , communities must be put a strict rules which can stop the responsible of this sorts of exploitation and inhuman abuse .
The authorities must ban the child who have less than sixteen from work in any situation and try to keep the rights of this children in education , living in appropriate conditions , health and eat , welfare and comfort , to re sum living like all other children
finally , this kind of abuse must be stopped because any human in this life have the right to live in the best situations for looking to best future of them .

good work but i have read something like that before

i thing it's in this link




https://www.unicef.org/protection/index_childlabour.html

[younes01]

مشكور اخوي achour idoughi
لم انتبه لكلمة these
يووجد خطا آخر بسيط لم انتبه له هو to beg
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[younes01]

soumia you mean that it's not my ideas !!!!
i never see a paragraph about child labour
this written expression it was done in the last bac in english

we want your attempt

[silver3100]

h did not say anything about
but yes i will try

[achour idoughi]

tomorrow or this night i'll give show you my attempt

[achour idoughi]

without give)

[younes01]

brothers and sister where is the pursuit to the best !
where is the perseverance !!!
where is yours attempts !!

[الهام الحياة]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة younes01

brothers and sister where is the pursuit to the best !
where is the perseverance !!!
where is yours attempts !!

just wait for tomorrow

[younes01]

ok we are under waiting

[الجوهرة السوداء]

thank's brother...
we will see what we can do...

[واقعية]

thanQ brother for this idea, I'll benefit inchaalla since I'm bad in French and English writing
I'm going to try to make an essay and post it here

* I suggest to prolong the duration for writing,
it might be one per two days so we can arrange an hour for it and make it as good as possible
because I'm following your daily lessons in the other subjects, and plus I'm pretty busy with my self-learning lessons

hope you think about that again

I thank you again, and wish that we'll improve our redactions fastly

[younes01]

waikia
action-ally we do the written expression day by day ; do for the english and day foe the french

[achour idoughi]

who among us doesn't want to become a child another time? But do you knowwhy?! Because childhood is the only period of time in which there is noproblem or dellema, we doesn't feel axious at all.
A child is always playing and enjoying his time in this period..
Unfotunately, this is not the case for all the children around the world.
children are suffering more and more especially those of poor contries from various exploitations. These latters ,I mean children, are engaged in unsafe conditions. They are obliged to work days and nights to meet the needs of their families
Their bosses exploit them in hard and dangerous labours..
moreover, they haven't even insurance. What a shame!!
It is time to react so that our children live a life which is full of love and security.
Many organization should be created to make end to this pure exploitation.
gouvernements must forbid and ban such action by setting up rules. in addition to this, they have to eliminate poverty .
Our chimdren are our tomorrow , hence we have to protecte them because protecting them means preserving the future generations

[achour idoughi]

where are your answers

[younes01]

achour idoughi i will back and read your essay later ( after a hour )