what can i

[zahidxp]

what can i do
what can i feel
my life is runing away
my heart is stolen
the futer is light
the past is dark
how can i stop fear
how can i get the glory
glory is working hard
glory is gratness
what can i say
what can you respond



i am new here it's my first poem
what do u think

[عبد النور مكي]

well....that's a nice start....keep going bro....

[real dream]

nice carry on
good luck