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قديم 2014-08-25, 12:17   رقم المشاركة : 1
معلومات العضو
Karim-Rap-4-Life
مشرف سابق
 
الصورة الرمزية Karim-Rap-4-Life
 

 

 
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العضو المميز لسنة 2013 وسام التميز في منتدى الإنجليزية المرتبة الثالثة 
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Hi pals!!
Hope u'r doin' well!!
Well,it took me a while to read, however I bet it took much longer to be posted LOL,
It seemed u were somehow belonging to a fascinated world that's called "Rap" !
Be grateful for every single word ur mind offers..,watch yourself...,observe how u interact with ur ideas... Assume much...Give it ur all.,,even,,,it might not work every time, yet eventually it will. That's when NEW style begins. Run with it, it'll keep u alive!I
Keep goin' bro! Hope u my best

Peace


Hello what's up brother how r u doing
Yeah, it's a great world that needs more attention needs a great mind's eye more culture rich vocabulary for a special delivery. It depends on who's the writer? if he's that good type it will be a good one talking about life in general or some cases in special private or whatever...! but if the writer is sick minded person and (makhlou3) his writing will be like I kill u I have cars I do this I did that see my cats eat my luch hhhhhh u know that kind of celebrities the Phony ones the cowards u know that kind of people who follow and immitate MK celebrities Hhhh
and yeah It was written and done in 2013 in a different way but I changed everything but leaving the same theme which is
I am not playing I am serioud in my topics









 


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قديم 2014-08-25, 20:08   رقم المشاركة : 2
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yakumo
عضو مميّز
 
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Hello what's up brother how r u doing
Yeah, it's a great world that needs more attention needs a great mind's eye more culture rich vocabulary for a special delivery. It depends on who's the writer? if he's that good type it will be a good one talking about life in general or some cases in special private or whatever...! but if the writer is sick minded person and (makhlou3) his writing will be like I kill u I have cars I do this I did that see my cats eat my luch hhhhhh u know that kind of celebrities the Phony ones the cowards u know that kind of people who follow and immitate MK celebrities Hhhh
and yeah It was written and done in 2013 in a different way but I changed everything but leaving the same theme which is
I am not playing I am serioud in my topics

Hi bro! that's pretty fine,thnxx!I
Yeah, I see a new style has so much potential, and so do u! The secret ain't the size of the steps u take; the secret is actually takin' one...ur cause's often much deeper .. so much efforts!! cuz when u choose to... U can handle anythin'..U can achieve anythin'..U can do anythin'.,,U Can!!!!& I'm one v ur fans!
I'm gonna be ready fr a new one!!

Just keep this masterful spirit!









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قديم 2014-08-27, 22:27   رقم المشاركة : 3
معلومات العضو
Karim-Rap-4-Life
مشرف سابق
 
الصورة الرمزية Karim-Rap-4-Life
 

 

 
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العضو المميز لسنة 2013 وسام التميز في منتدى الإنجليزية المرتبة الثالثة 
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة yakumo مشاهدة المشاركة
Hi bro! that's pretty fine,thnxx!I
Yeah, I see a new style has so much potential, and so do u! The secret ain't the size of the steps u take; the secret is actually takin' one...ur cause's often much deeper .. so much efforts!! cuz when u choose to... U can handle anythin'..U can achieve anythin'..U can do anythin'.,,U Can!!!!& I'm one v ur fans!
I'm gonna be ready fr a new one!!

Just keep this masterful spirit!

I don’t if i got your message for real or not; I mean about the new style if you mean the new method of writing I mean in the first writing I used to write randomly without measures and without counting lines and other Musical criteria. The lines here are shorter than the previous due to the kind of beats I was writing on they are slow and each line must contain only one bar after the middle of it and so on … and you can feel the flow reading it. My causes come coincidently sometimes when I’m walking street or watching TV or doing anything else words come to my mind and then I start to compose lines Two, three, four lines and a new subject and theme is built then I carry on writing till the end it depends on how much information I have about the topic, searching for rhymes, assonance, consonance … etc. about writing anything I want! I’m trying to be mature and having my personal attitudes no hypocrisy and paradox only reality and being real it’s the characteristics of a good citizen and freedom of expression. You’re my fan man thanks a lot for your following and time actually it’s the reason I carry on, you are appreciated; actually I found your vote last year on the contest of 10 best topics in the Member’s writing. For the next one (The 4th Damn) talking about politics and society in Algeria I’m not going to talk about it so much let it when it’s posted and analyze it needs the 4th verse to be finished and it’ll be ready for post. I hope you will like it Inshalah thanks for your support my brother you’re appreciated again.









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قديم 2014-08-30, 01:48   رقم المشاركة : 4
معلومات العضو
yakumo
عضو مميّز
 
الصورة الرمزية yakumo
 

 

 
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افتراضي

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim-Rap-4-Life مشاهدة المشاركة

I don’t if i got your message for real or not; I mean about the new style if you mean the new method of writing I mean in the first writing I used to write randomly without measures and without counting lines and other Musical criteria. The lines here are shorter than the previous due to the kind of beats I was writing on they are slow and each line must contain only one bar after the middle of it and so on … and you can feel the flow reading it. My causes come coincidently sometimes when I’m walking street or watching TV or doing anything else words come to my mind and then I start to compose lines Two, three, four lines and a new subject and theme is built then I carry on writing till the end it depends on how much information I have about the topic, searching for rhymes, assonance, consonance … etc. about writing anything I want! I’m trying to be mature and having my personal attitudes no hypocrisy and paradox only reality and being real it’s the characteristics of a good citizen and freedom of expression. You’re my fan man thanks a lot for your following and time actually it’s the reason I carry on, you are appreciated; actually I found your vote last year on the contest of 10 best topics in the Member’s writing. For the next one (The 4th Damn) talking about politics and society in Algeria I’m not going to talk about it so much let it when it’s posted and analyze it needs the 4th verse to be finished and it’ll be ready for post. I hope you will like it Inshalah thanks for your support my brother you’re appreciated again.

From the looks of your comments, it sounds like we may have come up with a winner with this great topic!! Thanks man, I really appreciate every single word you wrote!
The human mind is powerful, it can literally create darkness or light,,it's our choice!...& when you think you have the world in the palm of your hand, keep in mind life has a pretty way of knocking us off the perch we create in our magical magnifying minds..So stay brillant, be confident!..& I'd be willing ,bother, to bet you're learning how to do better.That's the point of getting older ; & it's my chance to also get better..(It's a brave thing to have a such good company) let’s do our best to spend more time in our heads and much more time in our hearts (with rhyme as you used to) LOL),,& with that, into the world we go!
The ending caption of this one;;;Believe in yourself, follow your words, and never EVER give up. You were really my best & you still are! ...Exciting to read your next greatest topics brother
God bless you









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قديم 2014-08-31, 23:30   رقم المشاركة : 5
معلومات العضو
Karim-Rap-4-Life
مشرف سابق
 
الصورة الرمزية Karim-Rap-4-Life
 

 

 
الأوسمة
العضو المميز لسنة 2013 وسام التميز في منتدى الإنجليزية المرتبة الثالثة 
إحصائية العضو










افتراضي

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة yakumo مشاهدة المشاركة
From the looks of your comments, it sounds like we may have come up with a winner with this great topic!! Thanks man, I really appreciate every single word you wrote!
The human mind is powerful, it can literally create darkness or light,,it's our choice!...& when you think you have the world in the palm of your hand, keep in mind life has a pretty way of knocking us off the perch we create in our magical magnifying minds..So stay brillant, be confident!..& I'd be willing ,bother, to bet you're learning how to do better.That's the point of getting older ; & it's my chance to also get better..(It's a brave thing to have a such good company) let’s do our best to spend more time in our heads and much more time in our hearts (with rhyme as you used to) LOL),,& with that, into the world we go!
The ending caption of this one;;;Believe in yourself, follow your words, and never EVER give up. You were really my best & you still are! ...Exciting to read your next greatest topics brother
God bless you

Yeeah; due to the facts that I love rhymes I learn words everyday and sometimes I forget about writing in english coz i'm also into arabic raps and if my french is good I can do it in french too ^^. sometimes I decide to stop writing but few months after I find myself typing again lines like rain words drop here and there common HHHH that's crazy man this is a good company too i mean words
for darkness ummm! i just hate that kind of writings that depict me as very sad and wanna suicide I don't choose to see these kind of writings coz it is really negative but reality and truth never hurt as soon as we're keeping it real. I do not blame those who write sad things it really affect them psychologically the cool thing if they don't care about it and let it go and i don't know if i'm right or wrong maybe i'm wrong but this is my point of view. sometimes I wonder if I may stop writing in the future or not I leave it for destiny!

thanks for ur time man and it's a pleasure to be on our family i mean the rest of the family coz it's been tripped and left by some members -maalish- this is life welcome anytime man thank u faithfully









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