خاطرة لصديقة مخادعة

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Do you think that the sparrow not fall out the nest
And the salmon leaves and never returns to the river
You decide because that was you now me
I'm such as the flower and the tree
When the wind blow very strongly
I'm strong
Such as the mountain remains lofty
Like the sea when he gets angry

what I can say that your poem is amazing contaning well chosen words appropriateful to the theme of your writing in adition to the rhyming words plus the ****fors and similes, you are just like sad condemned in the begining then you depict your self such as the natural phenomenon as strong as it is.......then I just want to say that your poem is so deep your words too....Finally I found someone who write deeper just like me......this part above is the part I'm impressed by....good luck for another works okey