my first poem

[رحمة 1994]

hi friends
it's the first time that i try to write a poem and i want to share it with you so please i'm waiting for your comments and suggestions and here it is




love has gone
leaving our hearts empty
except sadness and dispair
you are here and i'm here
no way to unit
mooving in the dark vain to find light
i call you but you don't respound
yet my love is very profound
come come and touch my leep
thus you realize how much my love is deep