That day...

[herry$]

That day
i was there
listening to her
i had nothing to say
nothing to do but cry

*****
She told us
that is heartless
and too ruthless
to hurt your mother

****
dear mother
u did whatever
to make me happier
even if i was a bad daughter
that used to ignore you
to yell at you
but not to tell you
"mama i love you"

****
that day
when i walked home
i though about you ,mum
about telling you
how much i love you

****
now i'm home
i'm here , mum
i wanna hug u
so where r you?
..
nobody was there
i searched everywhere
until i found her
sitting there
i called her
mother .. mother
but no answer
...
SAY SOMETHING
ARN'T YOU LISTENING!!

she was smiling
and me .. crying

i was too late
and fate never wait

She was .. Gone
and left me ....Alone
Alone...
*****
this is my first poem

[sarouna22]

God saves your mother

and saves all mothers


I felt it so much and i like it

thanks my sister

[herry$]

Thank you sis for passing , and frankly it is not a true story
but one of my nightmares

[fatimaa1]

oh sister so scary poem
but full of meaning as what sarouna22
said God saves our mothers
thanks for sharing
&
keep on

[herry$]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة fatimaa1

oh sister so scary poem
but full of meaning as what sarouna22
said God saves our mothers
thanks for sharing
&
keep on

Oh thanks dear for your lovely reply
may god bless you

[no way end of time]

ya allah wallahi this is a great words and deep from your heart may allah protect our mothers
whatever we do we can't give what they gave us

[herry$]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة no way end of time

ya allah wallahi this is a great words and deep from your heart may allah protect our mothers
whatever we do we can't give what they gave us

What a nice reply !! i'm so thankful sis
may peace be upon u

[spy4me]

?who taught me love

?too seeing above

i'm sitting in my ground and staring around

my soul looking for that hand

smooth like the desert sand

mum, whatever i do, to grant you your due

i can't give you, the favor of you

i remember, the time you spent

to guide me, the roads I went

mum, if my words are sufficient, my heart will be efficient

to thank you about caring me, to thank you about amusing me

i can see how the world is changing, but only thing here is biding

my heart wants to say, i love you mum, for you a kiss every day

what's a good person you are, no one like you so far
thank you for talking about mothers
your mother is a pearl you have to take care about her

[herry$]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة spy4me

?who taught me love

?too seeing above

i'm sitting in my ground and staring around

my soul looking for that hand

smooth like the desert sand

mum, whatever i do, to grant you your due

i can't give you, the favor of you

i remember, the time you spent

to guide me, the roads I went

mum, if my words are sufficient, my heart will be efficient

to thank you about caring me, to thank you about amusing me

i can see how the world is changing, but only thing here is biding

my heart wants to say, i love you mum, for you a kiss every day

what's a good person you are, no one like you so far
thank you for talking about mothers
your mother is a pearl you have to take care about her

Great words !! i'm so amazed , thank u brother , may god bless u

[AYA1997]

.it is so beautifule it make me cray
.i wishe ife i can write a poem lik this

[herry$]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة AYA1997

.it is so beautifule it make me cray
.i wishe ife i can write a poem lik this

And that's my point : make everybody cry xD
Just kidding , i'm really glad to see that my lil poem impressed ya
and u don't have to wish something that u r able to do^^
try and u'll write something more impressive than mine
May God protect ya dear

[AYA1997]

thanx sherry

[no way end of time]

thanx spy4me beautiful words

[herry$]

u r quite welcome ^^