Do you remember??

[ali gourgache]

Do you remember??

I remember your sight
Your feeling and your eyes bright
Iremember the years ago
When we tried together as you know

I remember the cock-crew
Over there;in my town;in my fields
Where there is a grain yields
and all my griefs and sorrow

Try again;try to remember the light
The stars;the moon;the sky in the night
I don't blame you 'cause you put it aside
You forget everything as you decide

The snow in the montain is white
Your sound is echoing where you shout
On the rock where you stay around
In my town;in my field;in the countryside

How can i make you remember,?
I haven't got sword to fight
I haven't got clock or reminder
i have just a pen to write

I remember when we accross the river
I remember the sound of thunder
Under the rain you shiver
All these and you still don't remember!!!

You ignore it and you put it aside
But remember i was your guide
That one day you laughed with a delight
I remember from you just hatred and flight

I hope you like it.......waiting your comments

[إفتكار]

thank you i licke it
we waitting for your news

[spy4me]

well done brother
we're looking for more from you

[mohbadboy]

awesome
i like it

[ali gourgache]

it's very kind from you ..................thanks for your encouragements ...........thank you again

[دموع الوفاء]

Really so cool
but i'v a question!!
who write this amazing words??
ur pain or ur pen!!
,,
Ur writing is so deep
so keep on
,,

[ali gourgache]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة دموع الوفاء

Really so cool
but i'v a question!!
who write this amazing words??
ur pain or ur pen!!
,,
Ur writing is so deep
so keep on
,,

thanks for passing..............actually i really wrote it from my heart to be a combination between the feeling of hope and sadness............but i'll never lose faith........thank you very much for your encouragement

[hiba27]

it's good ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; good luck in writing

[ali gourgache]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hiba27

it's good ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; good luck in writing

thank u soooooooooo much for your sweetest passage...............good luck you tooooooooo

[Darkness angel]

as always you write the best word's keep up

[ali gourgache]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Darkness angel

as always you write the best word's keep up

Thanks Darkness angel for your encouragement...............you made eager to write more

[Darkness angel]

hiiiiiiiiiii;as always u give the best i loved it

[ali gourgache]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Darkness angel

hiiiiiiiiiii;as always u give the best i loved it

And as always you post the best comments that you have..............i'm grateful to you and i'm sooooooooooooo sorry for the late comment...............thanks again and i wish you the best

[ali gourgache]

Do you remember??

[حكاية قلب]

Do you remember??

Yeah i remember
that this words are so
beautiful
nice
and honest

Well Done

i like it
^.^