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2011-12-07, 18:46 | رقم المشاركة : 1 | ||||
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To My Friend
IIt's a true feeling nothing Else
For the rhymes I just wrote it in a hurry the fact that I feel so sad just remember Yeah I just remember For The one who used to be my arm The one to whom I used to be an arm Damn Man damn what was that Words are out of description My world to you is missing that hurts when you're messing Remember what was our mission Our Friendship is passing god damn that hurts pay attention Nothing left everything is done it's gone You said words a lot of offenses A mountain of loveliness was fell down that words I never forget that realy hurt If I was You I never do that I never How I do that for my Friend I prefer to die instead of saying that Remember that days Remember that places where we used to be hunging around that times were really unforgetable laughing talking shouting rappin beatboxing words of fantazy now what i've is crying see you passing hoping hear you saying my name i don't care what you feel but it's a shame never have a friend like me we always used to be homeboys I never forget that I never want to pass We traveled from childhood to the younghood I'm lonely in the hood i feel no good Can't Imagine this My best Friend I'm passing just next to you no word no smile no thing at all pffff hhahah it's just like I don't know you I've no friend except you friend Now all what we had is deleted I remember I recall I feel I see I hear all things we did al places all jokes what I feel is sadness I can't Imagine man That hurt man That hurts yeah that hurts Wish you good luck in the name of brotherhood Remember that you start hurts not me Thank you for that I learned too many lessons i've nothing to say anymore I don't care if you go If you comeback you're welcome If you don't good luck I can't stay running behind you Remeber I am a Man Damn to friendship if I loose my principals
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2011-12-07, 19:34 | رقم المشاركة : 2 | |||
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2011-12-08, 11:38 | رقم المشاركة : 3 | ||||
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2011-12-09, 18:41 | رقم المشاركة : 4 | ||||
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2011-12-07, 20:25 | رقم المشاركة : 5 | ||||
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Damn... اقتباس:
that touched me more like the same what i'm passing in . . You feels so much pain .. i know But try to forget Cause it's the Only Thing that will Makes you Live again feel the life again don't give up No more tears no more pain . My New Rule " i'll Never Give Up THis will Never Stop me... Searching for LOve searching for peace making my dreams Come alive " ^.^ |
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2011-12-08, 11:39 | رقم المشاركة : 6 | ||||
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that right girl for fewx passed days i was giving you some advices abiout friendship you and someothers now i'm the one who need help hhhhh damn to these life it is too strangeous |
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2011-12-08, 17:50 | رقم المشاركة : 7 | |||
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welcome back karim it's been a while since you wrote us any of your amazing poems .....well i really love this one it talks about a delicate subject which is of course friendship....this word for a lot of people unfortunately doesn't mean a thing ....i really hope that your freind read it so he can understand how mush you care for him ....thank you a lot for these amazing words...god bless you brother |
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2011-12-08, 18:32 | رقم المشاركة : 8 | ||||
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2011-12-08, 18:28 | رقم المشاركة : 9 | ||||
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lol...we call it Destiny p: damn it's stronGer !! |
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2011-12-08, 19:53 | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |||
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you are welcom karim.....keep writing wonderful poems and you'll always see my comments...thanx again for your hard working |
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2011-12-08, 20:20 | رقم المشاركة : 11 | |||
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thank you so much you helpe me alot Ihad never thought that there r who like english . |
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2011-12-09, 18:47 | رقم المشاركة : 12 | |||
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Ok I'm glad to grab them and read them in my own desk cause i'm just right outside okey so I will show you my point of view just wait okey |
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