صفحة خاصة بالإنجليزية

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

peace be upon you
i will correct if nobody minds

well,the first sentence you said disaster,it's better to say phenomenon
the second sentence,suffer from not with
we say suffer from pollution then put a comma,and this is resulted from throwing waste
concerning throwing with o not ou
then put then put a comma after throwing ,negligence,and technological development
then so capiltalized after it we put a comma
so,we must keep our environment clean for our safety or you can say that to prevent from illnesses then carry on your sentence

best of luck

بالنسبة للفواصل و غيرها فانا دائما استعملها فالكتابة على الكراس

لم استعملها لانني اسرعت في الكتابة لذا كما تلاحظن التعبير جد قصير


شكرا على الملاحظات اتي الغالية


جزاك الله الجنة

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

بالنسبة للفواصل و غيرها فانا دائما استعملها فالكتابة على الكراس

لم استعملها لانني اسرعت في الكتابة لذا كما تلاحظن التعبير جد قصير


شكرا على الملاحظات اتي الغالية


جزاك الله الجنة

عذرا لكن يجب أن تستعملي النقط و الفواصل كما يجب هنا لكي يكون التصحيح كاملا

كما يجب عليك أن لا تسرعي في الكتابة كي لا ترتكبي أخطاء

الشكر موصول للأخت toulay على التصحيح و المتابعة

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

بالنسبة للفواصل و غيرها فانا دائما استعملها فالكتابة على الكراس

لم استعملها لانني اسرعت في الكتابة لذا كما تلاحظن التعبير جد قصير


شكرا على الملاحظات اتي الغالية


جزاك الله الجنة

العفو اختي لا شكر على واجب
امين يارب العالمين
بالتوفيق

[~ دروب الخير ~]

ماهو رأيك في موضوعي


هذه اول مرة اكب عن التوث

استطيع ان اوسع فيهفلدي عدة افكاااااار .....


اختصرته لاسرع وضع الحل فقط ....

ارجوا من الاستاذ ان يصححه لي .......

[the lord ahmed]

شكرااااا استااااذ هل من الممكن فقرات( وضعيات ادماجية ) مقترحة في شهادة التعليم المتوسط

[rayane1999]

السلام عليكم استاذ

ارجو ان تكون بخير

لدي اليوم فقرة عن التلوث

ارجو تصحيحها

~تحيــاتــي~

[ath111]

Here is the link,Lamia

https://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread...post1055996689

[~ دروب الخير ~]

هل من موضوع للحل استاذنا الفاضل ؟

[ath111]

https://www.sendspace.com/file/gff8k4

[abir2000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

https://www.sendspace.com/file/gff8k4

my answers

:

reading comprehension :

1) the text is an e-mail
2) true or false
(jack didn't meet tom yesturday ( true
(the boy died in accident ( false
3) i choose the right answer
the sender is jack
the driver could n't stop the car because he was driving very quickly
4) i refer to jack
who refer to the boy

mastery of ******** :

1) while i was leaving for the hospital yesturday , i witnessed an accident
she caused a problem last night when she was talking with him
2) he has n't seen his brother for years
i've watched this movie since eight o'clock
3) i've alredy received an e-mail from my friend
have you ever been in space ?
he hasn't replied him yet
4) ai/ = why , line/
ei/ = grey , came/
written expression :

From: Bob@yahoo..com
To: John@hotmail..com


Dear John

I am very sorry my friend, i was typing a text you've asked me about, suddenly, the light went off, i will write it again tomorrow

.

Yours Bob

[abir2000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة abir2000

my answers

:

reading comprehension :

1) the text is an e-mail
2) true or false
(jack didn't meet tom yesturday ( true
(the boy died in accident ( false
3) i choose the right answer
the sender is jack
the driver could n't stop the car because he was driving very quickly
4) i refer to jack
who refer to the boy

mastery of ******** :

1) while i was leaving for the hospital yesturday , i witnessed an accident
she caused a problem last night when she was talking with him
2) he has n't seen his brother for years
i've watched this movie since eight o'clock
3) i've alredy received an e-mail from my friend
have you ever been in space ?
he hasn't replied him yet
4) ai/ = why , line/
ei/ = grey , came/
written expression :

From: Bob@yahoo..com
To: John@hotmail..com


Dear John

I am very sorry my friend, i was typing a text you've asked me about, suddenly, the light went off, i will write it again tomorrow

.

Yours Bob

can you correct teacher

[ath111]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة abir2000

can you correct teacher

Everything is correct

Thank you very much

[abir2000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ath111

Everything is correct

Thank you very much

thank you a lot teacher

[~ دروب الخير ~]

thank you so much sir

this is my ansewr

1-an e-mail
2-true -------false
3-jack
4-he was driving quickly
5-i refer -----jack
6-who refer ----the boy
Mastery of ********
was leaveing----------------------------------witnessed

causeed--------------------------------was talking


1- He hasn’t seen his brother …for..years
2- I’ve watched this movie since .eight o’clock.

)
1- I’ve already received an e-mail from my friend) ………………………………………………….
2- Have you ever been in space ? …………………………………………………………..
3- He hasn’t replied him yet

grey-line-why-came


vert-----------/qi/
bleu-------------/ei/

[~ دروب الخير ~]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتــفآئلة

thank you so much sir

this is my ansewr

1-an e-mail
2-true -------false
3-jack
4-he was driving quickly
5-i refer -----jack
6-who refer ----the boy
mastery of ********
was leaveing----------------------------------witnessed

causeed--------------------------------was talking


1- he hasn’t seen his brother …for..years
2- i’ve watched this movie since .eight o’clock.

)
1- i’ve already received an e-mail from my friend) ………………………………………………….
2- have you ever been in space ? …………………………………………………………..
3- he hasn’t replied him yet

grey-line-why-came


vert-----------/qi/
bleu-------------/ei/

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