صفحة خاصة بالإنجليزية

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة akbi

thank you very much sir

The story is very nice though it is scaring but there are some mistakes like

After this day

It's better to say : Since that day

Some said

It's better to say: Some people said

The monster killed them

We say : The monster had killed them

Others said that he transformed them

We say: he had transformed them

That's all

Thank you