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Karim-Rap-4-Life ==>The Don Until I'm gone
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![]() Title: Karim-Rap-4-Life The Don Until I'm gone By: Karim-Rap-4-Life 26.03.2012 15.45 don't you amaze these days they see us with a narrow gaze what they have done to raise the money chasers got the keys gained profits folks votes they seize wish you get away with no please you're playing your big mouth saying comming late want us to pay attention you've been summing for money dunning In the time of ruining you were running you're not gaining as we're not escaping we stand our position your plan we're facing we displace the double face from our place nothing to lace except you we want to replace don't try to make the space it's a hard case True SoLDier don't fade they live for EvEr whatever you say is a cover don't mind we discover your principal was flee to live wherever real men were dying to live here for EvEr they never say never remember 5 October the massacre God is is my Shepherd i'm not gonna die I'm not afraid if I'm gonna die My heart is beating fast To be or not to be that's not a quest I'm coming from the west put it to the test I express what I've in my chest HONOR is the best of my best I don't care for the rest grab your nine before I sign put it on put it on I close my eyes PAAA!!! I'm still alive why? Invisible you can't see me so Heavy that your men can't carry me Street is my old school how you think I can be cool the hood I grew in not any good where the authority have the preority no other no food for the minority since I was little no damn thing changed there is money but where are food made? I grew up where many thugs on the streets freeze on your knees give what you've please ok!! don't kill me I....PAA PAA!!!! dead in calm oh damn he's dead among the traffic jam woop woop that's the sound of the police they will be condemned them for many years laws are laws but who's done is always the don loyalty is gone just hit the coin wait I see the same thugs running again they claim in prison will maintain common man don't be fool they call it corruption seduction temptation and no body give attention no caption let them thangs go no revelation God is is my Shepherd i'm not gonna die I'm not afraid if I'm gonna die My heart is beating fast To be or not to be that's not a quest I'm coming from the west put it to the test I express what I've in my chest HONOR is the best of my best I don't care for the rest let's talk about fashion why are they messing staffs of Jews are spreading Illuminati are planning arabes no scanning sleeping for America are obeying open your Tv again ask your children what they are watching Space Toon space Toon oh damn a big tool to fool MBC 4 all daughters are screaming before what the hell you're waiting for Melody and Rotana oh Films of drama ya punks where you gonna palastean is yelling no body listening Jews are killing and you keep looking you don't want your selves involved in hey you Rich Dubai of the east Bay I see huge building who pay Ah okey the same business every day big round tables too much money Haven't you see in Sumal there's nothing funny Christians rushed to solidarity where is your plans for charity Islam is the source of humanity you have a strong economy I hate you all arabes are gone damn to you all representatives don't claim to be muslims Real Muslims not like this one day at time little children of our little children will read the history of their countries they will realize that you were nothing escapers cowards looking forwards peace because you were cowards It's not tasty to see you on Tv hear you talking see you walking standing babbling you're nothing you deserve canning in boxes you foxes where my cannons at Hit that demons in their conferences Like Ben badiss with my pen here is reveal their deeds God is is my Shepherd i'm not gonna die I'm not afraid if I'm gonna die My heart is beating fast To be or not to be that's not a quest I'm coming from the west put it to the test I express what I've in my chest HONOR is the best of my best I don't care for the rest BOW DOWN when you see my RHYME BOW DOWN I cause your pain BOW DOWN it's BIG BANG Kamikaze Yo Wassup Karim-Rap-4-Life Anti-Conformist no Splits Patriot no riot The Don Until I'm gone ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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I must confess It took me Three hours to finish and It was difficult to write it It's been a long time I've not written a poem or lyrics so hard and I will not write again at least for a month or two I've no time |
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Yeah thank you so much for passing and encourging me and I would inform you that if I know that the result of election would be on my side I'll not accept it hhhhhhhhh ![]() and thank you for passingagain and my words are just what come to my mind and I can 't read even a line without your presence here all the members right here cuz it's an encouragement tahts' what makes me write more and more and thank you again and again for your nice words SIS |
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![]() i tottaly forgot to ask you do you draw Graffiti |
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Yes I do .....but not too much I'm beginner
.......why? are you interested in it? |
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But i draw manga i really like yr drawing exellent work for a begginer you are multi tallented may allah protect you from envy and jealousy |
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yeah thank you but I don't think it's a kind of Graffitti not it??? I think graffiti is drawing words in a very nice way doesn't it!!!!!!!!!!!
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It’s nice ,long,poem but really I enjoyed reading and analysing it ![]() As they say from every garden you pick up a flower But here I think there”s no garden no flower and instead of …………ok doesn’t mater….I think u get it Yeah unfortunately,this is what happen For me ofcaurse,the problem is when we believe in such”people”,in their sayings,in their promises,in their words but not in their actions…..yeah and the big problem, we who chose them We do and finally when one of us claims,you know where he will go”where we can’t hear his voice again”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So we have to accept the result coz they’re chosen by whom!!!!!!....... by us We see one of us ‘s arrested and we keep sielent”fishing eyes”NoONE dares and ask what’s happen there…………………why because it becomes our habit!!! Then inorder to forget what we’ve seen and what we heard outside ,Tv is the key,we all became”politicians”,”actors”,and there we can share our ideas”in the dark” ,where you can hear only “chchchch….don’t speak up………..ok ok it’s enough………” However, and fortunately brother Karim this kind of problem is found all over the world……coz simply there is no’DEMOCRACY” Any way ,Thank you brother for sharing us such very/very interesting Topic eventhough it was in the form of poem”Rap”but it contains a real life problem….it reflects the society’s sufferings No way Brother we’re vaccinated to obey We’re vaccinated to keep our mouths to be silent It becomes our habit…….. We who selected this way,we were the electors… so we who have to bear the results Thank you again brother Karim May Allah blesses be upon you always THE SUN WILL SHINE ONE DAY |
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It’s nice ,long,poem but really I enjoyed reading and analysing it ![]() As they say from every garden you pick up a flower But here I think there”s no garden no flower and instead of …………ok doesn’t mater….I think u get it Yeah unfortunately,this is what happen For me ofcaurse,the problem is when we believe in such”people”,in their sayings,in their promises,in their words but not in their actions…..yeah and the big problem, we who chose them yeah that's the problem but the problem is not on voters i mean people they are just a simple ones looking for better days how they could know real ones from fakes ones Only God can save us We do and finally when one of us claims,you know where he will go”where we can’t hear his voice again yeah for real !!!! ”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So we have to accept the result coz they’re chosen by whom!!!!!!....... by us We see one of us ‘s arrested and we keep sielent”fishing eyes”NoONE dares and ask what’s happen there…………………why because it becomes our habit Bad habit until what? Then inorder to forget what we’ve seen and what we heard outside ,Tv is the key,we all became”politicians”,”actors”,and there we can share our ideas”in the dark” ,where you can hear only “chchchch….don’t speak up………..ok ok it’s enough the thing that make the truth speechless toothless blood floods on the floor closed door of happiness However, and fortunately brother Karim this kind of problem is found all over the world……coz simply there is no’DEMOCRACY Yeah I can see Liberty is blind it needs to wear glasses ” Any way ,Thank you brother for sharing us such very/very interesting Topic eventhough it was in the form of poem”Rap”but it contains a real life problem….it reflects the society’s sufferings THAT'S WHAT REAL RAP DO No way Brother we’re vaccinated to obey We’re vaccinated to keep our mouths to be silent It becomes our habit…….. We who selected this way,we were the electors… so we who have to bear the results Thank you again brother Karim May Allah blesses be upon you always THE SUN WILL SHINE ONE DAY Now we just wait for the judgement day thank you so much for your special reply it means so much to me |
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![]() So Niiiice So Greatt |
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