I wish i could fly "the best poem of mine"

that's me · 2011-08-04, 14:09

butterfly,fly high
go to switzerland
go to shanghai
every known land
loves you little shy
fly quietly,as if you were a spy
fly over seas , fly by the sky
fly up the hill and though the milky way
show brightly,come and stand by
tell me how do you do
after a busy day
I like listning to you
coz you never lie
you laugh and never cry
butterfly , fly away
spray your charm,till you die
you are so free
and that's the reason why
"I wishI was you
I wish I could fly"

ابتساام · 2011-08-04, 17:00

it's nice thanks

spy4me · 2011-08-04, 17:24

nice one "that's you" a butterfly flies quitely as if it was a spy (like me) lol
thanks

that's me · 2011-08-05, 10:32

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ابتساام

it's nice thanks

thank u ابتسام

that's me · 2011-08-05, 10:51

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة spy4me

nice one "that's you" a butterfly flies quitely as if it was a spy (like me) lol
thanks

thnx , I 'll change the poem to be
like this
:

(fly quietly , as if you were spy 4me)
I hope it 'll be a good spy just like you

sali05000 · 2011-08-16, 20:43

u r great.go on.

SSOH95 · 2011-08-17, 23:48

i love it
keeeeeep up the good work

Hillin · 2011-08-18, 11:42

Peace upon you sister,a nice and sweet poem,I read it as if i'm eating a sweet apple"congratulations
I know it's impossible to fly since we're human being but our feelings can fly,do you know the famous song"i'm alive of Celine Dion,by listening to it you feel as you're going to fly.to be honest,if you're not fond of her,it's somehow hard to feel as well as me coz Celine Dion is my favourite singer.
well,thanks again
my best wishes

that's me · 2011-08-23, 00:44

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sali05000

u r great.go on.

u are greater thnx

that's me · 2011-08-23, 00:45

[QUOTE=SSOH95;7007024]i love it
keeeeeep up the good work[/QUOTE
I will thnx ]

that's me · 2011-08-23, 01:20

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hillin

Peace upon you sister,a nice and sweet poem,I read it as if i'm eating a sweet apple"congratulations
I know it's impossible to fly since we're human being but our feelings can fly,do you know the famous song"i'm alive of Celine Dion,by listening to it you feel as you're going to fly.to be honest,if you're not fond of her,it's somehow hard to feel as well as me coz Celine Dion is my favourite singer.
well,thanks again
my best wishes

thnx your comment made me fly and about the song I really love that song
you just taught me that there are many ways to fly and that it not impossible
to fly by our own way , you are such a wise

girl glad to have you in the forum
thnx alot

honnest smiley · 2011-08-26, 15:24

awesome butterfly i mean poem !! lol

it's terrific keep it
up hun <3

Hillin · 2011-09-01, 20:19

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة that's me

thnx your comment made me fly and about the song I really love that song

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة that's me

you just taught me that there are many ways to fly and that it not impossible
to fly by our own way , you are such a wise

girl glad to have you in the forum
thnx alot

Welcome Dear,Thanks for your sweet comment since really it touched me deeply.So;I can say we have the same tendency;I mean both of us love the same song
my best wishes

lynz hardoussa · 2011-09-16, 14:19

Amazing poem
Keep goin ^^

براهيم جموعي · 2011-09-16, 16:48

nice peom
thank u