my poem "our world"

[salwastar]

hi guys


i bring to you my poem


i want you to say if it is better or not


here we are



we are in this world like flowers

we are in this world like brothers

speak and mention together

the world can be better

our world is like a star

when you see it you can't imagine how far

between you and it

is too hard

so if you like your world

don't wish to be a lord

otherways you will rule

it with the wrong




i look forward to show a positif replies


see you