take it eay

[مريم آيت علي]

If you want to be a star,stand up when you tell me,
Get up early as you can,
You wark as hard as you can,
Don’t say «I can not » ,you can if you want.
You must depend with your personality.
Don’t be parrot when you talk.
Draw your path when you walk.
You must take the baby steps till,you arrive at the sommit.
Don’t live for the fortune and fame,
Don’t live just for play the game.
If you fail don’t wast your time in vain,
You must try again..
Even, if you did’t know how
don’t be dizzy,don’t be crazy..take it easy
And try to solve your problems by yourself
Later..ask help
LNC : 7-21 Jan 2008

[bila00b]

Very good poem with little mistakes ...but you ROCK girl

[مريم آيت علي]

this is not my writting; because I am bad in english...very bad

[دموع الوفاء]

nice what u choose for us,,,
i like it especially this sentences
Don’t be parrot when you talk,,,
Draw your path when you walk,,,



thanks for this green words ..keep it going,,,,
.
salam

[super doctor]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة verte28

this is not my writting; because I am bad in english...very bad

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What did u day .................................................. ..... So don't say i'm bad ......din't say i can't ................................ tryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......................... ...!!!!!
shkoun ali zad am3alam

[خدووجة]

very nice poem , keep going thanks

[super doctor]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة bila00b

Very good poem with little mistakes ...but you ROCK girl

I think u r thinking u r good in english........................................... .................(you ARE Arock girl) ......................so befor find the mistakes of other people find urz............................................... ..............................https://www.djelfa.info/vb/images/icons/mh04.gif

[Dante]

good poem tnks

[مريم آيت علي]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة دموع الوفاء

nice what u choose for us,,,
i like it especially this sentences
Don’t be parrot when you talk,,,
Draw your path when you walk,,,



thanks for this green words ..keep it going,,,,
.
salam

I am happy because there is one who liked it...
thank you my sister

.

[مريم آيت علي]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة super doctor

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What did u day .................................................. ..... So don't say i'm bad ......din't say i can't ................................ tryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......................... ...!!!!!
shkoun ali zad am3alam

and befor say to you You :
wark as hard as you can..i must say that for my self.

thanks .

[مريم آيت علي]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة super doctor

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What did u day .................................................. ..... So don't say i'm bad ......din't say i can't ................................ tryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......................... ...!!!!!
shkoun ali zad am3alam

and befor say to you

You wark as hard as you can..i must say that for my self.

thanks .

[assoumma]

i liked thous words ...they have a greaaat meaning ........thank you

[ikram95]

very nice poem ,i like it ,
keep going thanks