Help to correct an article

[Ali26000]

السلام عليكم

I'm looking for someone to help me by correcting my article (about 8 pages)


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[toulay]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته
what kind of article? is it similar to the last time's article?
is it hard?
What about the deadline?
Good luck

[Ali26000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته
what kind of article? is it similar to the last time's article?
is it hard?
What about the deadline?
Good luck

A scientific article, so it is similar to the last one (but not the same topic). I have about 1 week.

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[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ali26000

A scientific article, so it is similar to the last one (but not the same topic). I have about 1 week.

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I see
Then,post it in here
I will send it back to you next wednesday nchallah
I'll try to devote much time for the article to finish it before wednesday nchallah
But please,send it to me as a document (word) because last time it was kinda hard for me to read it
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[Ali26000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

I see
Then,post it in here
I will send it back to you next wednesday nchallah
I'll try to devote much time for the article to finish it before wednesday nchallah
But please,send it to me as a document (word) because last time it was kinda hard for me to read it
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Thank you very much.

The problem is the size of the article is 68 kb, but in this forum we can send a file with just 7 kb. So I cannot you send it as world document.

If you are agree this my email:. Give me yours which I can to send you the wold document. I'm sorry for this annoyance.
Thank you again

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ali26000

Thank you very much.

The problem is the size of the article is 68 kb, but in this forum we can send a file with just 7 kb. So I cannot you send it as world document.

If you are agree this my address: belmezia[AT]leesu.enpc.fr. Give me yours which I can to send you the wold document. I'm sorry for this annoyance.
Thank you again

You're welcome
Then post it as you did last time after that you can remove it
Good luck

[Ali26000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

You're welcome
Then post it as you did last time after that you can remove it
Good luck

Try with this format

[toulay]

Done
You can remove it
Good luck

[Ali26000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

Done
You can remove it
Good luck

Ok

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What's it about ?

[Ali26000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة lilou lilou

What's it about ?

A scientific article

[toulay]

Hello
Well, the correction has been done
these are the remarks:
Is "linking" the same as "creating a balance"
A lot of the parenthesis and colons have been taken out to make the writing more flowing
What do you mean by "supply area"
Concerning the manager of the Doua Campus( is he a man)
Finally, the number 22 was the number you wanted there?

I will send you the article later on nchallah
Good luck

[Ali26000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

Hello
Well, the correction has been done
these are the remarks:
Is "linking" the same as "creating a balance"
A lot of the parenthesis and colons have been taken out to make the writing more flowing
What do you mean by "supply area"
Concerning the manager of the Doua Campus( is he a man)
Finally, the number 22 was the number you wanted there?

I will send you the article later on nchallah
Good luck

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Thank you for your response.
1) Linking = connecting
2) For the "the parenthesis and colons": you can delate them if it is necessary.
3) supply area = plus de surface (in French)
4) Concerning the manager of the Doua Campus= manager in general (I don't know if man or woman)
5) The number 22 is the surface of the parks


What do you think about the writing (Do you understand the general meaning?)

[toulay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ali26000

السلام عليكم
Thank you for your response.
1) Linking = connecting
2) For the "the parenthesis and colons": you can delate them if it is necessary.
3) supply area = plus de surface (in French)
4) Concerning the manager of the Doua Campus= manager in general (I don't know if man or woman)
5) The number 22 is the surface of the parks


What do you think about the writing (Do you understand the general meaning?)

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I see
Anyway,I'm gonna send you the article in few minutes
Good luck

[Ali26000]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة toulay

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته
I see
Anyway,I'm gonna send you the article in few minutes
Good luck

It is Ok. Thank you very much. Also don't hesitate to contact me (private message) if you are need my help. Again thank you.

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