Wrong fate

[bila00b]

i'm standing on a straight
a straight conect me with her
i'm in love wth the wrong fate
space and time .. life is unfair

She will be piece of me
always sometimes she will be
i'm a drp in her sea
my heart is blind but i can see
i love her only by words

my finger are my lips
i could give her the worlds
with her i dont need love tips

[Mohamed]

Peace be upon you brother

That's wonderful
Is it yours? I hope so
Allah bless you

[bila00b]

thank you brother .. and yes it's my poem ... i dont lie .. it's ramadan ... I wrote many poems but thay are lost... I will write others ....

[Mohamed]

Salam
I do believe you brother
I asked because I almost smell your talent
I want to tell you that we are about to create a pace for members' writings
It will be great that you share with us more of them
Allah bless you

[bila00b]

thank u very much ... i'm just doing my best